it is important to keep your old friends than to make new friends
some people believe that making new friends is more important than keeping old friends. However, I disagree with it and believe that keeping old friends are more effective than making new friends. I will support my view point with two reasons.
Firstly, the longer the relationship, the better the trust issues. old friends are the people we know for a long time and with whom we are likely to have spent a long time together. For example, one of my school friends with whom I have been friends with since 5th grade is my best friend. The reason behind the fact is that she has been with me through my thick and thin. she knows the sufferings I had to go through on my worst days and also the celebrations I had on my best days. she is the first one to congratulate and console me at my utmost period. On the other hand, new friends are hard to trust. it takes a certain period of time to know the actual intention of a connection. there are people who pretend to be a friend only to achieve a definite intention. they are not the people who will be there to share the extreme trouble of a friend. In case of an old friends, they are more reliable.
Secondly, old friends are better adviser. they know a person more than a new friend as they have seen the strengths and weaknesses of that person. they are more likely to give the best suggestions as a friend. For instance, when I was confused about my career choice after high school, my best friend from school guided me to the right path which eventually turned out to be the best decision I could ever take. On the contrary, a new friend would be unlikely to lead as a friend as he or she would have a little idea about that person. An old friend wins in this scenario again over a new friend.
In conclusion, the issue whether keeping old friends is better than making new friends or not is complex. some may argue that making new friends is wiser considering the continuous change in life. Nevertheless, I still contend that it is better to keep old friends over the new one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39050131926 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3676707163 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456464379947 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5312398424 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.347826087 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91304347826 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508819985582 0.236089414692 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181214519967 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171150723638 0.0737576698707 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.396912107053 0.150856017488 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138090068644 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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