Different people have different approach towards life. Thus their approach for achieving their goals varies. In fast paced world like today, everything is rat race. People are running after materialistic goals. Well, it is true it sometimes requires rash decisions because of the different factors like time limitations etc.
however, a well thought out process or right decision taken at the right time will always outweighs the need for a rash decision. Why?
Because while starting a work you will consider its pros and cons, its various approaches. And then make a final decision considering all the factors. Consider a case: you need to buy a phone, which is recently launched. And has also created a hype in the market. You bought that phone on that basis, without doing any research. You later found out that some features are really bad and now you left with just repent. You cannot change your decisions now.
On the other hand, if you had contemplated before buying. You would have come to know about its pros and cons. Thus, you would have averted buying the phone. It's better to research that regret.
Contemplated decisions always save some damage. Consider another example where some children went to a small picnic. After seeing a lake there, they decided to go for a swim. Force of the waves increases during evening time, while they were in hurry, they couldn't think of this factor. And as they entered in the lake, the force of the waves increased. After that they could not get out of the lake. Note here, it was kind of capricious decision. They did not contemplate the decisions and its consequences. But it was timely decision of the safe guards that helped bringing the children to the shore.
Now had they considered their decision thoughtfully they would have thought about 'the force of the waves' factor and would have averted this tragedy.
In conclusion I would like to say different people have different approaches. But the best approach is think your thoughtfully. It’s better to spend some time thinking rather than having regret afterwards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e have different approach towards life. Thus their approach for achieving their goal...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'outweigh'
Suggestion: outweigh
...ion taken at the right time will always outweighs the need for a rash decision. Why? B...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... bad and now you left with just repent. You cannot change your decisions now. On...
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Line 8, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lake, the force of the waves increased. After that they could not get out of the lake...
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Line 8, column 573, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to bring' or 'bring'.
Suggestion: to bring; bring
...decision of the safe guards that helped bringing the children to the shore. Now had t...
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Line 12, column 104, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...nt approaches. But the best approach is think your thoughtfully. It's better to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202898550725 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.185990338164 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.06038647343 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06038647343 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0797101449275 0.0444667217837 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101449275362 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0531400966184 0.0406280797675 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54331296075 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0193236714976 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0048309178744 0.0016655270985 290% => OK
Determiners: 0.0917874396135 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217391304348 0.0249443105267 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00966183574879 0.0148568991511 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2111.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 350.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03142857143 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334285714286 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248571428571 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174285714286 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111428571429 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54331296075 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 64.2039699122 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.2903225806 23.380412469 48% => Sentence lengths are too short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4479221383 59.4972553346 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0967741935 141.124799967 48% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2903225806 23.380412469 48% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.451612903226 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 36.1474654378 51.4728631049 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.0962962963 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273064119342 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0762264456141 0.123202303941 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0947849838781 0.077325440228 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.438079279747 0.547984918172 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193924731545 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732343406326 0.161403998019 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068816023635 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19022811129 0.385218514788 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105690958346 0.0692045440612 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131799310117 0.275328986314 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968181555669 0.0653680567796 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88274336283 328% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.