as people rely more amnd more on technology to slove there problem , the ability of human to thing for themselve will surely deteriorate
In todays world's every single thing that we want is just one click of a button away.Food, clothes, transport, electronics, you name it. So technology play vital role in daily life, without technology one could barely imagine one life.Technologies makes possible most of the work we do in out life from driving car to using elevators,etc.
Technology make the world smaller by connecting the people through various platforms for example we can travel to any
country which we want to, can make a friend from different ethnicity, possible because of Facebook. It also help human to
think out of box, make new discoveries,inventions. We have numerous of example such as if there is not internet there would be no Facebook, no search engine.
With the help of technology one can do most of the things he want to do. Now a days we can even switch on off light fan with the help of remote,this makes our life easy as we dont have to get up and switch off light or fan. You can order any item to want buy through e-commerce sites and this will improve our productivity as we can use time that we save from going out for shopping in some other work. Though technology have various negative impact on human as we are getting more and more rely on technology for example for doing simple mathematical calculation we are using calculator. this one of the example, which is according to me should not be done.
In end the we can say that everything has its positive and negative side so as technology has, but as compared to negative side we have many reasons to use technologies in our daily life as it won't affect the ability of human as per my consideration if used in a right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Food
...want is just one click of a button away.Food, clothes, transport, electronics, you n...
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Technologies
...ology one could barely imagine one life.Technologies makes possible most of the work we do i...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...life from driving car to using elevators,etc. Technology make the world smaller b...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...r to using elevators,etc. Technology make the world smaller by connecting the peo...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atforms for example we can travel to any country which we want to, can make a fri...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
..., possible because of Facebook. It also help human to think out of box, make new di...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , inventions
... think out of box, make new discoveries,inventions. We have numerous of example such as ...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...coveries,inventions. We have numerous of example such as if there is not interne...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inventions. We have numerous of example such as if there is not internet there w...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be no Facebook, no search engine. With the help of technology one can do m...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...nology one can do most of the things he want to do. Now a days we can even switch on...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...an do most of the things he want to do. Now a days we can even switch on off light fan wit...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...o most of the things he want to do. Now a days we can even switch on off light fan wit...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...on off light fan with the help of remote,this makes our life easy as we dont have to ...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f remote,this makes our life easy as we dont have to get up and switch off light or ...
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Line 7, column 590, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...al calculation we are using calculator. this one of the example, which is according ...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...ing to me should not be done. In end the we can say that everything has its positiv...
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Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...f human as per my consideration if used in a right way.
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsideration if used in a right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59271523179 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85365344979 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9940596417 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146914981765 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597089016666 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734142928815 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699245112096 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481281427063 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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