Technology is a boon to mankind. From the invention of the electronic gadgets, our manual work has been reduced and great amount of task can be accomplished within a short time. Technology advancements has provided us with most of the best equipment which a human finds arduous. With the invention of various devices and techniques, technology has conquered man and made an enormous impact on everyone's lives. People have come to point where most of them could not imagine a life without technical devices and methods which are to be applied in our daily tasks as well as at different work areas.
Since the technology has made its image in the society, people often use it even for simplest tasks so as to reduce strain. However at the end saying that, too much of anything is bad, with too much use of technology people are likely to be torpid in their activities and therefore thinking capacity is hindered as most of the tasks given could be easily done with the use of technology and its devices like calculation, statistics, arithmetic and logical operations.
However, there are certain tasks which cannot be accomplished with the help of technical equipment, though they help us at a great deal, most of the machines in present day lack reasoning ability which humans have. So, its better to limit the use of technology and its devices before they start owning us. In saying that, there's a saying " Things you own start up owning you " which provides us information that if technology starts taking us over, it could be dangerous. Machine should be a slave to the man but man should never become a slave to the machine or else with the advancements, technology could throw us in dangerous situations often when selfish people use it for their own motives.
Therefore the author's statement is valid upto some extent as man should find a way to balance the use of technical devices so that it does not affect this thinking ability. Human must try and give his maximum before technology starts taking us over and use it at necessary circumstances, In this way he can preserve his thinking ability and limit the use of the devices and methods unless it is necessary. Technology used properly in a limited way is a great way to develop us and the society leading to a happier and peaceful life.
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involv 54
- People rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Write a respond in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f 50
- People rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Write a respond in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f 50
- People rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Write a respond in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning f 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...le often use it even for simplest tasks so as to reduce strain. However at the end sayin...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... simplest tasks so as to reduce strain. However at the end saying that, too much of any...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...e they start owning us. In saying that, theres a saying ' Things you own start up...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...people use it for their own motives. Therefore the authors statement is valid upto som...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...for their own motives. Therefore the authors statement is valid upto some extent as ...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ffect this thinking ability. Human must try and give his maximum before technology star...
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Line 7, column 432, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a limited way" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is necessary. Technology used properly in a limited way is a great way to develop us and the so...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227064220183 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.169724770642 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0940366972477 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045871559633 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0688073394495 0.0444667217837 155% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128440366972 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.052752293578 0.0406280797675 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61859020808 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252293577982 0.030933414821 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00229357798165 0.0016655270985 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825688073394 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252293577982 0.0249443105267 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160550458716 0.0148568991511 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2313.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 402.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75373134328 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335820895522 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23631840796 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1592039801 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106965174129 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61859020808 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495024875622 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 54.0806779437 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.7142857143 23.380412469 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2457771994 59.4972553346 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.214285714 141.124799967 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 23.380412469 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 52.3461265103 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.43548387097 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405961018748 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138457461559 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0602024467965 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552467782556 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146445556215 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178705116921 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384884116895 0.0892212321368 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.391963034262 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.042097408152 0.0692045440612 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290721234953 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127802102131 0.0653680567796 20% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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