The author has proposed a solution to a problem related to accidents occuring on the island of Balmer. The author claims that the main reason for the accidents is between the use of mopeds which is primary source of transportation and pedestrians. He suggests the council of Balmer island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season as the population increases to 100,000 there. He concludes that by limiting the number of mopeds the accidents could be minimised to 50% as the same solution was employed by Seaville's town council which is adjacent to Balmer island.
However there are many underlying flaws in the given argument. Firstly, moped is not the only source of transportation at Balmer islands, as it is not guarenteed that everyone uses it, there are many other transportation facilities like cars, buses which are little less expensive.So the author cannot assume that the mopeds are the main reason for the accidents to occur. There is lack of information about other vehicles used for transportation especially in summer,it is not definite that most of them use mopeds
Secondly, there is not enough explanation that mopeds are the reason for accident, it might be due to people's reckless driving, drunk and drive etc and there is no enough substantial evidence to support that most accidents recorded are due to use of mopeds. It is difficult to judge that reducing the use of mopeds will for about 25 a day will minimise the accidents occuring at Balmer islands.
Furthermore, the author makes a false analogy by comparing two different islands. He compares the town of Seaville to Balmer islands and fallaces that the same solution will provide good results but it is untrue. The population of Seaville is different compared to Balmer islands. More people might not be using the same transportation at Seaville. However,there is no enough evidence to say that the same result will be obtained like Seaville by limiting the moped rentals as two different islands are compared here.
Therefore, the author draws dubious conclusions based on false anology. The limiting of moped rentals might be one of the reason to reduce accidents but to say that its the only reason is fallacious. It would be evident if the author provided enough evidence to state his argument before making assumptions.
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involv 54
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271393643032 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.180929095355 0.15541462614 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0929095354523 0.0836205057962 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366748166259 0.0520304965353 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0195599022005 0.0272364105082 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139364303178 0.125424944231 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0562347188264 0.0416121511921 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20411244576 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041564792176 0.026700313972 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0977995110024 0.113004496875 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268948655257 0.0255425247493 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00733496332518 0.0127820249294 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2382.0 2731.13054187 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 446.07635468 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26842105263 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.57801047555 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415789473684 0.378187486979 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286842105263 0.287650121315 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228947368421 0.208842608468 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136842105263 0.135150697306 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20411244576 2.79052419416 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 207.018472906 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460526315789 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 48.4165959747 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 76.0 23.2022227129 328% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 267.145203962 57.7814097925 462% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 476.4 141.986410481 336% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 23.2022227129 328% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.724660767414 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 3.58251231527 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 104.684210526 51.9672348444 201% => OK
Elegance: 1.96907216495 1.8405768891 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576640273183 0.441005458295 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.366671789747 0.135418324435 271% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0508312507748 0.0829849096947 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.936478380721 0.58762219726 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131944223014 0.147661913831 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.440298663388 0.193483328276 228% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105497619135 0.0970749176394 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.412836263355 0.42659136922 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0353745863993 0.0774707102158 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.402681203942 0.312017818177 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135489262875 0.0698173142475 194% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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