As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

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...olving around us in our day to day life, technology and human thinking are the be...
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... technology rather than believing on our own abilities. Technology releases time ...
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...nology rather than believing on our own abilities. Technology releases time for...
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...r us which we can spend with our family, friends and can complete our hobbies how...
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...ever it is also effecting our health and our day to day habits and routine, techn...
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...technology gives us wings so that we can actually implement our imaginary ideas a...
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...nd dreams, it helps us to accomplish the impossible scenarios and situations, lik...
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...e reaching to our people who are in need 100 miles ago within 2-3 hours is imposs...
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...miles ago within 2-3 hours is impossible,but technology makes is possible with a...
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...le,but technology makes is possible with a great ease, this is the magic of techn...
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...t technology makes is possible with a great ease, this is the magic of techno...
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...ogy which we should appreciate. Pros and cons arises for every term, there is no ...
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...very term, there is no solution for that,we can say it is needed to make a bala...
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...olution for that,we can say it is needed to make a balance because if everything ...
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...s good that there would be nothing which will be helpful to make it even better. ...
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...d that there would be nothing which will be helpful to make it even better. F...
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...logy is the masterkey to success, it can ensure that with the help of a little th...
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...inking and efforts you can acheive a lot of things in a very short time span, als...
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...n, also after getting a good success, it encourages us to do better and use more ...
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...chnology and try to invent revolutionary things which will make our life more com...
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...fortable and easy, technology have given us enourmous things which only human thi...
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...inking and human force cannot give, like travelling to miles in some hours, getti...
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... hard cash anywhere and anytime, getting food delivered to our homes which person...
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...sonally I like the most and ofcourse the telephonic system which connects people ...
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...ll over the world, it makes us connected to each of of our family, friend and off...
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...orld, it makes us connected to each of of our family, friend and office every day...
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...ice every day and every time, technology helps us to complete our life and this i...
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...s only possible because of extraordinary human thinking. Who would have imagined,...
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...y possible because of extraordinary human thinking. Who would have imagined, a ce...
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... a century ago that anyone can even make electronic vehicles which will not use d...
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...ntury ago that anyone can even make electronic vehicles which will not use diesel, pet...
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...sel, petrol or even CNG. One of the most important invention of Technology is abo...
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...ut utilising the human technology to the fullest, instead of taking it negative w...
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...o the fullest, instead of taking it negative we should appreciate the technology and...
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... should appreciate the technology and we should give our contribution to help gro...
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...w technology more in coming future which can give a happy life to our successors....
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...hnology more in coming future which can give a happy life to our successors. ...
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...hinking results in extraordinary results and inventions, it is contributing in ev...
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... every sector, wherther it is education, health care,country economy and industri...
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...herther it is education, health care,country economy and industrialisation, it is ma...
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...isation, it is making people realise its importnce in every field, using the tech...
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...echnology wrapping inside human thinking makes us realise that only technology ca...
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... do nothing, it needs the power of human thinking which can implement the real ti...
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... scenario, in the education field we are able to see many more equipments, study ...
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...dy materials and even virtual professors which makes children and students to und...
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...rstand better, in the health care sector we have many inventions in which with th...
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... help of technology, doctors are able to create test tube babies which helps infe...
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...ile couples to live a happy parent hood, adding to this we can also make organ tr...
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... of technology, more and more unemployed people are getting jobs and are able to ...
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...o earn money which increases the country economy and if we take the example of in...
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...dustrialiasation, I can say Dubai is the best example, here they have merged 2-3 ...
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...echnologies to create world higest tower the burj khalifa which is really a beaut...
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...ifa which is really a beautiful creation and is not in the hands of human thi...
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...ful creation and is not in the hands of human thinking only, technology is the m...
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...speed and also the power to create magic but in other hand, it is destroying our ...
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...r natural habits and routine, earlier we used to take good food, leafy vegetables...
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...and fruits to gain immune system and get a healthy body, but now technology is so...
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... much evolved that we have synthetically produced food material which provides us...
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...us benefits in one way but also gifts us side effects which is the core reason of...
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...nefits in one way but also gifts us side effects which is the core reason of man...
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...t we do not want to think about the side effects and the harmful situations it is...
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... is capable of utilising the 100% of its brain, but because of the term called te...
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...nology, it is making us lazy, people dun think about any new thing, these days th...
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...ey only think what technology makes them to think about. In news it is very trend...
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...ly think what technology makes them to think about. In news it is very trendin...
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...ing that world war 3 can happen anytime, we cannot predict anything about it and ...
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...his would be the mass destruction, if we take this concept, people or say the rul...
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...rulers are only tring to take this as an oppurtunity to show how powerful they ar...
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... how much powerful weapons they have and they can use againts their opponent, but...
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...they are not thinking as human, they are not thinking about humanity, they are no...
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... thinking how much destruction, loss and loneliness it can create to the whole wo...
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...king how much destruction, loss and loneliness it can create to the whole world. At...
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...echnology is really a power to the human imaginations but it should definitely ut...
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...ly utilise proper and human should never consider everything granted,there should...
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...ld never consider everything granted,there should be new learning every day,everym...
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...d,there should be new learning every day,everymoment. If we will learn more, we can impl...
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...e new learning every day,everymoment. If we will learn more, we can implement mor...
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...ment more, we can invent more, we should understand that human thinking is as imp...
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...rtant as the technology. We rely more on technology to solve opur problem but we ...
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... should also try to understand our inner power, our real strength.
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...ld also try to understand our inner power, our real strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 50.0 19.5258426966 256% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 38.0 12.4196629213 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 52.0 14.8657303371 350% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 33.0 11.3162921348 292% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 117.0 33.0505617978 354% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5142.0 2235.4752809 230% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1011.0 442.535393258 228% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08605341246 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.638814254 4.55969084622 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68581712937 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 399.0 215.323595506 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394658753709 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1570.5 704.065955056 223% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 30.0 6.24550561798 480% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 23.0359550562 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 403.63428082 60.3974514979 668% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 367.285714286 118.986275619 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.2142857143 23.4991977007 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 75.0 4.97078651685 1509% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 93.0 7.80617977528 1191% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2078439552 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937658916617 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361074574785 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482048680118 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413908911672 0.0667264976115 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 14.1392134831 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 12.1743820225 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 181.0 100.480337079 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.2143820225 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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