As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
there are several reasons which will defend the necessity of technology. even though most of the arguments in favor of technology are true, when it come to critical thinking and human interaction, technology have severe drawbacks. the main three point that this passage will be discussing about are as follows. with constant dependency on technology, the ability for human to make split decisions deteriorate. the social interaction will also have its draw back due to people leaning towards technology for their concerns. the final, and the most important factor is that, the heavy dependency on technology will leads to loss in productivity.
with the rise of smart phones and hight technology personal devices, people of this generation are able to get answers within split seconds using those technologies. due to their heavy dependency on technologies, people of this generation become stranded when that factor is taken away from their life. as simple as making a small mathematical calculation, people tend to look for calculators and their phone before they try to make the calculation in their head. even while going out on a walk, if the navigation device doesn't work, people tend to panic rather than finding out the next possible way.
the other factor that would be discussed in this passage is the effect technology has on social interaction. as people tend to use their smart phone more often, face to face communication have become irrelevant. the reason for majority of the invention human have made is due to social interaction. if that social interaction is taken away from our life, they is a possibility that innovation might also become stagnant.
the final and the most important factor is the loss of productivity. this point summaries the other two points discussed in this passage. when a person lose his critical thinking, and if that person becomes an introvert, he ultimately becomes unproductive.
even though technology has paved us a way for us for a brighter future, it was also affected for decision making power, lack of social interaction, and loss of productivity. unlike the human brain, technology is man made and it has draw backs. technology can only work with the information that is been provided to it whereas the human brain can work on its own.. therefore I conclude this passage by stating technology has a negative effect on our personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, therefore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09137055838 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8205815683 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489847715736 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2536714147 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5238095238 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198254684748 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061804443078 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467526666483 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110464007141 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698529790982 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.