As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology has been a major boon for mankind since ages. As the technologies are advancing, it is deteriorating the thinking ability of humans. According to the researchers, humans will be in complete slavery of technology in the near future. In the hunger of advancement, mankind has their complete focus on inventing the hidden treasures of science in the field of robotics, medical and cultivation. Waking up with the help of alarms and ending our day saying Goodnight to AI assistants have lead to complete domination of modern technology on human. It has been evident in many studies that human brain works on the phenomenon of learning. Whenever a human sees, it creates a mesh-like network of the image in the mind which is processed by the brain. These new details always act as an input to the feedback system of brain learning which helps in anticipation. Scientists have been working day and night on realizing such theories which can reduce human's workload by generating smart machines. These machines force students to use calculators instead of doing numerical calculations in brain and engineers to use simulators instead of evaluating transfer functions manually. According to the recent survey in North America, students of the age group below 20 years were found analytically weak than the students of the age group between 20 years and 30 years. It has been observed that the average IQ level among the students of the age group below 20 years has shown a major declivity over the last 10 years. Brainstorming the consequences of the advancement in technology and the recent studies over the deteriorating human thinking ability has resulted in an organization of programs to encourage human thinking over utilising developed technical machines. The education administration should regulate strict rules on usage of calculators, computer software in the curriculum of students of lower age group. It is correctly said, "Foundation is the soul of the building." Hence, we should encourage mankind to focus on the analytical foundation of their brain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2245508982 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05937191836 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.591558606 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 5.21951772744 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126471063101 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492327409208 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612643551631 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126471063101 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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