As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
For the last three decades, humans improved in a way that never experienced before in the human history. Although several reasons come to play in development, but the most influential effect is provided by the invention of transistors and electronics. William Shockley found an innovation to control electricity as the God controlling over the people. Since resulted improvements in technology brought conveniences in our daily lives, some people tend to support that relying on technology damage people's ability to think for themselves. Oppositely, I do not think that using technology for our lives has prevented us to think.
To begin with, as useful as technology gets, it cannot diminish all the problems of humankind. In fact, while solving a few problems, technology causes new issues to rise. For example, the machines are frequently used in automated factories, which created employment opportunities for people in old times. Now, people who used to work for factories, have hard time to find new jobs. Hence, human must solve another crisis called unemployment caused by improvement in technology. Moreover, planes, cars and other transportation vehicles use oil for energy, which is natural resource that becomes harder to find and extract every passing day. While people need to think for new resources to use for energy, they also need to think ways to solve the air pollution caused by usage of oil. Thus, technology might make life easier by serving us in several ways, it engenders new obstacles to tackle by society.
Secondly, in old times, people had to find their own way to learn and little eagerness to come up with inventions. Today, technology brings the knowledge and tools to provide new solutions. For instance, computers and the Internet make it extremely easy to reach out published papers, books and softwares that are used to compute and simulate the problem in hand. Any person can get online and download the software called Satellite Tool Kit to learn about satellite kinetics and orbit arrangements. Moreover, they can simulate their own scenarios to discover new solutions to problems in space related issues. If we did not rely on computers and the Internet, we would not be able to even learn anything about satellites and movements.
On the opposite side, people might argue that technology solves every small problem that a person might be able to solve by thinking themselves. Therefore, people lose the capacitity to think and provide for oneselfs. One example that cell phones help us every day is the GPS that we use to find addresses. People indicate that we would not able to find our ways without a cell phone because we cannot think in that way anymore. The thing missed here is that GPS is giving us a way of thinking, which is similar to looking the North Star except being much more accurate. While following GPS, you need to understand the roads and signs to find your way.
In conclusion, even though some people cite that technology has bad influences in our lives as it solves problems that are solved in human minds before, I think that it gives us a new way of thinking and encouragement to find what is unknown. Through the beginning of the history, our problems have been changed all the time and this time the change comes from technology. While solving problems, it creates new ones for us to think and overcome. Hence, people's ability of thinking enhances as technology improves.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely det 70
- 17.The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station."Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the c 53
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the roads and signs to find your way. In conclusion, even though some people c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2890.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 575.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02608695652 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69742213982 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 906.3 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4353125553 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6551724138 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8275862069 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41379310345 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305642914101 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819568001972 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763254129513 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176324470027 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725215978451 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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