As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni

Above statement tries to link reliance technology impacts on humans' thinking level . Thinking for themselves does not always mean they are trying to come up with a smart set of solutions to a critical problems . Thinking for themselves can be anything like he/she might be thinking about daily on going activities .

Technologies clearly reducing our time which we used to spend some times back on mundane works or repetitive tasks. computers reduced lots of paper works and made much more easier to search for one particular piece of information and the same task was taxing people who had had to search it manually . Specially Google search engine making things much more simple with it ability to search for coherent piece of information world wide . Even people who are deprived of getting quality education or having questions , doubts which they can not get answer from their teachers can get answers with Internet . They can contact new people to share information and ideas . Which was once unimaginable . Technology clearly reduced our commute time . Once people used to be dependent either on their on feet or on domestic animals . Transportation shorten this difficult path by intruding new ways of commuting people from one location to distant location by car, buses, flights , trains or bicycle . Without relying on the technology it is really hard to imagine our daily lives passing.
In summary technology ameliorated people's lives .

Technology actually saving enough time for people to think for themselves . We are in world where problems or issues never in be scant . To solve such intricate issue one needs to have dedicated sufficient time to come with brilliant solution . we can have enough time by availing technologies otherwise most of the time in the day needs to be spent on repetitive tasks . This world needs radical thinker to solve complex problems . technologies are going create enough space for such a development. Technology has been solving many complex problems and creating its own problems such as global warming , climate change . Technologies are dependent on humans . without humans ability to think it is hard to imagine exist of technology . To solve technologies problem as always it needs humans to think of it .

With the help of technologies we are exploring the world with much better vision . We are able contact our family in a minute saying away from their location . We are able to travel and share ideas with different nation people . we are not just thinking about our living planet earth . Technology made us to think about galaxies outside our galaxies . With technology people are able to contact online doctors when in emergency . Technologies are trying to create happy and healthy environment .

In conclusion , lets not have luddite attitude to treat technology by linking it like it reduces humans thinking and all . Lets embrace all the advantages which brought in everybody's lives .

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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in summary', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260952380952 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.188571428571 0.157235817809 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100952380952 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457142857143 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0647619047619 0.0444667217837 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114285714286 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0609523809524 0.0406280797675 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79255652364 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0495238095238 0.030933414821 160% => OK
Particles: 0.00190476190476 0.0016655270985 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.0285714285714 0.0997080785238 29% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114285714286 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.0148568991511 90% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3063.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 509.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01768172888 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361493123772 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255402750491 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172888015717 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110019646365 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79255652364 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 219.290929204 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457760314342 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.7643008228 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6194690265 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4242424242 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.576808392 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 141.124799967 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4242424242 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.212121212121 0.674092028746 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 77.0 5.21349557522 1477% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.9645174734 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.45859872611 1.64882698954 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421880270346 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0923108868873 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0915074049256 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432374316333 0.547984918172 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165705001213 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119622830538 0.161403998019 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059889540331 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.157012387982 0.385218514788 41% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0851747664765 0.0692045440612 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215997462597 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883892722482 0.0653680567796 135% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 3.66592920354 300% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 33.0 13.5995575221 243% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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