I could not agree with above statement .It is absurd to say only studying major cities will reflect the essential characteristic of the society . A society might be amalgam both cities and rural areas . studying Cities alone won't be of much help .
If we take Lifestyle of a particular society people into account , the lifestyle varies differently for city people and village people . In some cities people might have be following different life style . Just by seeing the flashy life style of city we can not categorize the society is a well mannered or well educated society . If we take country India as an example 70% of the population live in villages . but Most of the IT and BT software companies located in silicon city of India that is Bangalore . Just studying one of the major cities like Bangalore , we can gather information about what is happening in Bangalore , or background about Bangalore or of Bangalore People, or political and new grown in technology . But city Bangalore does not reveal completely the actual Traditional Values of India . To learn about a country or societies complete History , characteristic and wellness , one needs to interact with people or by observing people . Most of the time what happens is cities people will be just busy in their scheduled work . They wont get enough time to share their thoughts . So I feel villagers are the best option if one is looking for opinions about culture . It is all about getting information .
There might be poverty in the nation . you will get a chance to learn poverty unequivocally from village . Village is simply the reflect of the whole people's lives . No ostentation . Everything will be straightforward . It would be easier for one from other society learn quickly by seeing with evidence in villages and those chances are very less in cities .and moreover the statement asserts we need to study major city to learn about characteristics .
Each city is like DNA of each individual person . As how a person has unique characteristics each city will be famous for it's own culture , attitude and for its traditional values . say person wants to spend some quality time in minor city not major city then studying or observing major city does not impute to his knowledge of the society and won't help in leading his stay in minor cities . Based on requirement One has to decide studying which city is more advantageous rather than studying completely outbound concepts is of futile .
In conclusion , major cities do provide valuable insights in terms of political , current affairs or new technologies but one should also mind studying minor cities along with major cities to garner solid information about a society .
- extended family is less important now than it was in the past - sohrab 61
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
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['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'i feel', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261855670103 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.167010309278 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0948453608247 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536082474227 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0350515463918 0.0444667217837 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131958762887 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0474226804124 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76785500132 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226804123711 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0680412371134 0.0997080785238 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0268041237113 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103092783505 0.0148568991511 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2793.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 483.0 452.878318584 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78260869565 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32298136646 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229813664596 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151138716356 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101449275362 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76785500132 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44099378882 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.674864954 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5769230769 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3253564257 59.4972553346 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.423076923 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5769230769 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.423076923077 0.674092028746 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 78.0 5.21349557522 1496% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.5582895366 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.72580645161 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405597940393 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0905472019702 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0700123017208 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432593224475 0.547984918172 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193651593201 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118673854536 0.161403998019 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761009301825 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267894321326 0.385218514788 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0607069559328 0.0692045440612 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249203067199 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567261863581 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.5995575221 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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