as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology has changed our life dramatically in a positive or negative way.I agree with this above statement “people rely on technology nowadays”, in this world technology has become an integral part of life. Things are easy when technology comes in play and also technology has made our life easier. But I don’t agree with the second half of the statement “the ability of humans to think for themselves” there is no current proof that advancing technology will deteriorate human mind. We humans design technology to allay the work of people, most people commute through automobiles and for any age group Technology offers new learning opportunities through eBooks, apps and videos.
Furthermore, today’s hanging with younger or pre-commute generation we see that they are smart enough they can book all the things just by a click and can do all those things that we can’t even dream of, but they are getting addicted to it and didn’t know what’s going on in their surroundings, and mainly for children and teenagers who should spend more time in playing soccer, volleyball or any outdoor games they are busy in playing video games which has direct effect on their health, growth etc. Surely nowadays you see teenagers glued their ears with headset, always busy in their mobile chatting, playing games which distract them from doing any productive work.The main factor technology has direct impact on our body in a negative way. For example- we know one should live abstemious lifestyle but spending your time by more binge watching or by playing games on desktop or phones leads to obesity , and thus they feel more lethargic and bovine.
On the other hand technology plays important role in global awareness and also makes learning fun for students. We can get news from any part of the world which was not possible in ancient times. Infact many resarchers to do research, for example- the cells in our body we can define their shape,chracters color and many more things ad it is all because of technology im here talking about microscope and even in bioinformatics we use many application to find out the protein structure ,DNA bands and many more things and also to solve many problems.
So one should know how to use technology in a good way rather than using it for destruction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...matically in a positive or negative way.I agree with this above statement “people...
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...act them from doing any productive work.The main factor technology has direct impac...
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...echnology has direct impact on our body in a negative way. For example- we know one should live a...
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...es on desktop or phones leads to obesity , and thus they feel more lethargic and b...
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Suggestion: to fun
...lobal awareness and also makes learning fun for students. We can get news from any ...
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...ls in our body we can define their shape,chracters color and many more things ad it is all...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...eir shape,chracters color and many more things ad it is all because of technology im h...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'many applications'.
Suggestion: many applications
...scope and even in bioinformatics we use many application to find out the protein structure ,DNA ...
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...cation to find out the protein structure ,DNA bands and many more things and also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, for example, in fact, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96640826873 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65837491123 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576227390181 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.550512439 60.3974514979 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.727272727 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1818181818 23.4991977007 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265459682273 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991936141758 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774549464767 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138139619602 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818769563157 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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