As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
In the year 1950 Alan Turing for the first time asked the question 'Can a machine think?' This was the onset of the revolution in the field of technology. There has been lots of improvement in the field of technology in the last fifty to sixty years and people are relying on technology more and more to solve the problems. The statement states that as people rely more on the use of technology, their ability to think for themself will deteriorate and I agree with the aforementioned statement. Technology has made the world connected with each other and fatser with a launch of new technology in the market everyday, which is used by people in an extensive manner to solve their problems. For instance, the use of AI which stances for 'Artifical Intelligence' to solve a issue is increasing day by day and these are not only used by professionals, even students are using it complete their assignment. The AI specially ChatGPT is has been in the most highest used AI since its launch in the November 2022, it is a AI which would generate the answer of the all the question ask to it within seconds and the answer which is generated it is difficult to differentaiate that whether a human has wrote it or a machine. Students from all the background has used this to complete their homework and assignment in a fater way, but this would not be any useful for them, as they would not learn anything from it. Assignments are given so that the student thinks about the subject and research more about the topic in dept so he or she gain knowledge from it. This would affect their cognitive region of the brain. Secondly, the different grammer checking tools are also their like QuillBot and Grammarly to make the grammer and syntax correct in seconds. This would also generate the task and summarize the passage into simpler language. This is used by the students and working professions to make their work error free and I am not denying its usuage but if it is use extensive than the people would not care to learn the correct syntax and would only be depended on these tools. This would affect their thinking ability. With the advancement in the field of AI where it is made to adapt to think like humans, if human starts being depended on them then their power to think creativly would decrease. The imagination power also decreases and this would affect them in the future. As the AI is replacing human in almost most of the sector, it is very essential for the human to think for the solution which an AI cann't give as this would ensure their jobs in the future. I am not denying that the use of techonolgy is bad or it will always produce an ill effect on the human. Humans are using the technology which is making the prodcution line much fater and effecient, but a extensive use of these technology would be harmful for the human. In conclusion, the use of new technolgy, but an individual should now when they are being controlled by these technology than they controllying the technology. Sometimes, using the AI to complete the work due to pressure of completion is fine, but always usimg thses AI for the completion of work is not good and in longer run it would affect the thinking power of the person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asked' instead.
Suggestion: asked
...ear 1950 Alan Turing for the first time asked the question Can a machine think? This was the onset...
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Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... launch of new technology in the market everyday, which is used by people in an extensiv...
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Line 2, column 642, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an extensive manner" with adverb for "extensive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...arket everyday, which is used by people in an extensive manner to solve their problems. For instance, ...
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Line 2, column 768, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ces for Artifical Intelligence to solve a issue is increasing day by day and thes...
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Line 2, column 874, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'completes'?
Suggestion: completes
...ofessionals, even students are using it complete their assignment. The AI specially Chat...
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Line 2, column 945, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...AI specially ChatGPT is has been in the most highest used AI since its launch in the Novembe...
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Line 2, column 945, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...AI specially ChatGPT is has been in the most highest used AI since its launch in the Novembe...
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Line 2, column 1190, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...differentaiate that whether a human has wrote it or a machine. Students from all the ...
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Line 2, column 1525, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gains'.
Suggestion: gains
...re about the topic in dept so he or she gain knowledge from it. This would affect th...
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Line 2, column 1917, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ons to make their work error free and I am not denying its usuage but if it is use extensive t...
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Line 2, column 2072, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... would only be depended on these tools. This would affect their thinking ability. Wi...
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Line 2, column 2564, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ould ensure their jobs in the future. I am not denying that the use of techonolgy is bad or it...
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Line 2, column 2765, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion line much fater and effecient, but a extensive use of these technology would...
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Line 2, column 2784, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...r and effecient, but a extensive use of these technology would be harmful for the human. In conc...
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Line 2, column 2937, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...d now when they are being controlled by these technology than they controllying the technology. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2636.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 577.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56845753899 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55004191962 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417677642981 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8335665933 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.523809524 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4761904762 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226183961679 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767892123835 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092923198216 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226183961679 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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