As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
In antiquities time you write a letter and then move to the post office to send it. This letter will post to your family member by the postmaster. That system kills a lot of times. But technology makes it easier. With technology, you can easily send a text to your family member in a short time. So I mostly disagree that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
With technology, we can think about more and more complicated matters and solve these in a short time. Without it, we can't think or solve one single complicated matter.Without it we aren't able to solve the problem instantly.
With technology, we can move easily all over the world. not only that but also we can travel in space now. In old times it was just a dream. Day by day fuel concentration over the world is going down. with technology, we made an alternative way of fuel for running our transportation.
Overall, without technology, we can't make our life easier. With technology, we can do many jobs at a time. That's why people rely more and more on technology to solve problems.It does not mean that the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66818181818 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76059566575 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6113442558 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1875 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.75 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362489048675 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114556266002 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216849355765 0.0758088955206 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241569888785 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148437192574 0.0667264976115 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.38706741573 77% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 100.480337079 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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