As people reply more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Over the period of time, technology has become an essential component for the survival of our mankind. From mundane tasks to mind boggling tasks technology is required everywhere. Technology not only helps in our day to day lives but it is also highly essential for economic growth and for the welfare of nations. With the help of technology, one can have any time access to any information required. However, like they say that there is always a drawback to something too nice. One of the major drawbacks of technology is how it affects our cognitive abilities.
Technology is the source for all information that is supposed to make our lives easier. For example, when an assignment is given to a college student, the first thing the student will do is search for the solutions of the problem statements on Google or any other search engine. While this makes his/her life easier and helps them save time, it has a negative impact too. Students must adopt the habit of thinking over problem statements instead of looking for the answers online. This will not only help us develop our brain but also gives us a reality check about our abilities without any external help. Thinking over a problem statement will also help the student during examinations where internet access will be not be permitted to get the answers.
Since we can get all the information and resources online, the habit of reading is not seen nowadays in most people. In earlier times when there was no internet, our ancestors gathered information by reading books or newspapers that helped enlighten them. Books have always been the biggest source of knowledge there can ever be. Reading books make us smarter which help us develop our thinking abilities. Reading can also help us improve our vocabulary. The information that we get on the internet might not always be accurate. There can be room for mistakes on the internet whereas there are relatively lesser mistakes in books and hence the information we get from books can be more reliable.
While using technology affects our thinking capabilities we cannot undermine the advantages of technology. Several concepts that might seem inscrutable to an individual might be explained in a much easier and efficient manner on the internet. With the help of many educational videos that exist on the internet a student can watch them and learn from anywhere at any time. With the help of technology, one can keep records of their bank records and transactions from time to time. It has helped the nations across the world to enhance their economic structure as well as other factors to a great extent.
Thus we can say that technology has made our lives easier in ways we cannot even imagine at times. However as technology advances we have lost the ability to solve problems on our own. Humans have given up on thinking and adopted the method of searching for solutions online. Hence it is required to first think over a problem and if we still can’t come with a solution then we can use technology for help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Over the period of time, technology has become an essential com...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...get from books can be more reliable. While using technology affects our thinking c...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... as other factors to a great extent. Thus we can say that technology has made our...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n ways we cannot even imagine at times. However as technology advances we have lost the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...thod of searching for solutions online. Hence it is required to first think over a pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87283236994 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59479418969 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464354527938 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.0 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.332727234 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3214285714 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5357142857 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.67857142857 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138560119921 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414195356306 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414386400663 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837688703201 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455695278739 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.