People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People’s attitudes are a topic of study that psychologists have been researching for quite some time now. The statement’s assertion is that attitude is determined more by the immediate surroundings and comparatively less by society. I agree with this statement as the attitude of a person is constantly being molded starting from their adolescence to the very present point of their life and a major chunk of these interactions has to include their primary circle being family, friends, and relatives, and the secondary circle consisting of society.
Firstly, attitude is something that is considered to be a set of fundamental rules that a person strongly believes in and hence bases all his actions on those. These perceptions are built majorly by the influence of their experiences starting from early childhood. Research findings suggest that our attitudes are predominantly shaped and built during the formative stages of our life namely school life, the influence of teachers, early childhood friends, and values imparted by our parents. This is clearly because of the number of hours spent by people in schools and colleges over nearly two decades. That is a lot of time for any person to start building an attitude influenced by his surroundings.
Consequently, it is during this stage that a kid who has experienced a lot of hard times will grow immune to similar situations when he is an adult. In contrast, a kid who was shielded from problems in his upbringing will tend to develop an attitude of victim mentality when he gets introduced to adversities. It is the same situation that has shaped two different attitudes. Meanwhile, society has a small role in such circumstances when dealing with the personal problems of individuals. Even if there is a role of society it would only be in a very generalized sense - related to career choices.
To conclude, immediate situations compel individuals to act upon them which in turn causes them to develop certain conceptions of reality and leads them toward shaping their attitudes.
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- People s attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position y 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, so, while, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15269461078 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00096665202 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8106060511 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173292158063 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571111500466 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515324883528 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101175668664 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585979778152 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.