People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
A famous saying from the movie 'A Wednesday, "We are resilient by forces, not by our choice", fits well in the context. The issue prompt eliciting that people's behavior can be determined if they are exposed to forces and pressure and not by their own choices or likings. I completely agree with the issue prompt due to the following reasons.
When a child enters the world, he learns from his parents, and thereafter he goes to school and universities and learns several things from there. The child is always exposed to some sort of guidance, either by his parents, family members, or any external member like friends, teachers, etc. This encourages the child to develop the quality of decision-making, however, this also has a negative effect if taken into consideration, the other way round. For instance, if a student is out to elect the subject while heading towards the college, there are many pedantic people around him to provide him with several views which ultimately confuses the student. The student has a variety of choices but he isn't able to opt for the subject of his own liking. Moreover, if the student's elder brother or sister has elected any subjects at their time then that student is forced to elect the same subject by their family members, seeing the growth of their elder siblings. This might provoke the student and the student might get annoyed and act differently. Thus, it's not the choice of the student but the force that extracted the behavior of the student.
As talked earlier in the first part, in the movie, 'A Wednesday, the terrorist force were frequently attacking the Indian civilization, which goads the common man of the society. Frustrated by the continuous attacks, the common man fomented with a plan to exterminate the terrorist force. The common man explained at the end of the movie that it was not his task to execute the terrorist but since the terrorist forces were consistently assailing the civilians of India and the government on the other hand not taking any actions against them, lead him to expose different behavior of anger that was originally calm and placate. This example shows that people's behavior can be different when they are exposed to forces.
To sum, people can act differently in different situations. If they are provoked by the forces, either internal or external, they exhibit various characteristics. This cannot be accomplished if people are allowed to make their own choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...student has a variety of choices but he isnt able to opt for the subject of his own ...
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Line 3, column 1057, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... get annoyed and act differently. Thus, its not the choice of the student but the f...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98062953995 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7028061272 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515738498789 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6710846418 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.277777778 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233351640754 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720717227664 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1033547926 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148781484811 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496910593532 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.