The prompts claim that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation, and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate opinions and reasons on the given topic. Some may go for it, while others can not argue at all it. I partially agree with the given claims that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. The three reasons and examples supporting the given statements are presented in the paragraphs below.
Firstly, people behaviours are determine by the various factor like transformation of the age, culture, family status and so on. For instance, At the starting of Stone age many peoples are live together in forest and these time people are aggressive in behaviour. In additionally, food are collected from gathering animals and they live in caves. However, at this time friendship was more important than that presents.
Additionally, People behaviour are also influence by the culture of the families and their living societies. For example, culture of the United state of America and Nepal, In United State of America, People are happy to lives alone, there are no any better social relationship with their societies, and this is due to they can't involvement in their children's in their society. However, In case of Nepal, There are people happy with their family as well as their society and every children's khown every person have amiable relationship in their society.
In conclusion/ to sum up/ in summary, the reasons and examples presented support the claim/position that base on culture, family status, society. The essay highlights the People's characteristic is largely determined by forces not of their own making. The examples of stone age and people from different countries are illustrate to support the these essay.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
..., while others can not argue at all it. I partially agree with the given claims t...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...elow. Firstly, people behaviours are determine by the various factor like transformati...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so on. For instance, At the starting of Stone age many peoples are live together...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther in forest and these time people are aggressive in behaviour. In additionally...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in behaviour. In additionally, food are collected from gathering animals and the...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'influenced'.
Suggestion: influenced
...Additionally, People behaviour are also influence by the culture of the families and th...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople behaviour are also influence by the culture of the families and their livin...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence by the culture of the families and their living societies. For example, cul...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ple are happy to lives alone, there are no any better social relationship with th...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es alone, there are no any better social relationship with their societies, and ...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial relationship with their societies, and this is due to they cant involvement...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eir societies, and this is due to they cant involvement in their childrens in their...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn making. The examples of stone age and people from different countries are illu...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'illustrated'.
Suggestion: illustrated
...nd people from different countries are illustrate to support the these essay.
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this essay' or 'these essays'?
Suggestion: this essay; these essays
...countries are illustrate to support the these essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in summary, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23492063492 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73936432517 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8063863002 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154734614518 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555955223834 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492214109993 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976405189155 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460866235628 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
..., while others can not argue at all it. I partially agree with the given claims t...
^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...elow. Firstly, people behaviours are determine by the various factor like transformati...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so on. For instance, At the starting of Stone age many peoples are live together...
^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther in forest and these time people are aggressive in behaviour. In additionally...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in behaviour. In additionally, food are collected from gathering animals and the...
^^
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'influenced'.
Suggestion: influenced
...Additionally, People behaviour are also influence by the culture of the families and th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople behaviour are also influence by the culture of the families and their livin...
^^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence by the culture of the families and their living societies. For example, cul...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ple are happy to lives alone, there are no any better social relationship with th...
^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es alone, there are no any better social relationship with their societies, and ...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial relationship with their societies, and this is due to they cant involvement...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eir societies, and this is due to they cant involvement in their childrens in their...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn making. The examples of stone age and people from different countries are illu...
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Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'illustrated'.
Suggestion: illustrated
...nd people from different countries are illustrate to support the these essay.
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this essay' or 'these essays'?
Suggestion: this essay; these essays
...countries are illustrate to support the these essay.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in summary, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23492063492 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73936432517 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8063863002 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154734614518 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555955223834 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492214109993 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976405189155 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460866235628 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.