When we discuss an idea or policy, the enthusiasm could not determine anything but the only certainty of passion. As people are varied from one to another, it is true that some of the people, not all of us, are critical to the idea or policy which they deeply commetted to. This essay should not be an all or nothing conclusion, given the people are different.
Let's begin with the idea, when it comes to the scientific research, there are some one who are professional in the field he devoted in.While the path of scientific development is full of the theories , assumed by the people who did not belive in it, oppose to the mainstream , these opposite ideas evolved the science of human being likewise. Copernious, who asserted the heliocentroism which violate the main theory was died for his opposite idea which opposed to the earthcentroism. However, his theory was proved at the end, though he is not agree wih the main ideology. Maybe this is the cost of chasing for truth, while it is really worthfull for all of the people who want to dissipate the truth to the world. As we conceive copernious again today, he was ignored by people at his time even paid his death as cost. He is not the one who commited the idea while he made a significant contribution to the world.
What's more, when it comes to the policy, there are more people who did not agree with the policies while still significant to them.There is a policy in China called individual location identification that people are seperated by location, thus people could not move freely in China.Because the only the local people have the rights of sharing the local rights like education, purchasing houses ,etc. By this way, the Government indeed can control people's moving and keep sercurity. On the other hand, it limits the people's freedom. There is a famous representee in China called Luo Yonghao, he found this problem and proposed this issue annually. In the end the Government also put this issue in hight place and began to make policy to handle it. Now, people maybe as free as Americans who can live whereever he wants in his mother land.
Finally, whteher the people comitted to the policy or idea is not important when it relates to the significance of them. No matter who makes the contributions, he deserves this significance. Like the famous slogan of Deng Xiaoping, the leader of China decades ago, "No matter the cats are black or white, it is a good cat if it can catch rats." In my opinion, the contributions come first. Given to the differences of peolple. if you say the paper is white, there is also someone asserts it is black, which is meaningless to make progress.In conclusion, I agree with this essay partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, may, really, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74105263158 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67341879497 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509473684211 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1936930852 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218409563508 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619185175627 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487493003767 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130308589058 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194628691719 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.