Every action one does in her day to day activity is a result of conscious or subconscious decision that they made before the action.These decision may affect them personally or a group of people as a whole. Thus, the basis of these decision should be considered carefully.
If one has a make a decision affecting a large group of people like a nation wide or a company wide change, and it is based on personal emotions it can have very adverse implications later in the history.
Moreover, after the implications of this decision, if one tries to justify them on some logic, they end up losing trust of the people and are said to lack the leadership qualities.
For eg, Hitler believed that his nation and cast are above all the others and took malicious actions based on this personal and emotional decision. We are facing the aftermath of that decision till date. Such actions cannot be justified by any logical reasoning later.
On the other hand, if one has to make a decision for their personal life, like a decision to sell an ancestor's house, the emotional angle takes the driver seat. One can of course decide based on facts like the market value, the structure of the house but the nostalgia and emotional value attached with the place also takes a bigger role in this decision.
Thus, every decision does have a personal and an emotional angle hidden in it. But if it affects a larger population, the leaders should be able to keep there personal emotions aside and then make a sound decision. Otherwise, they would be poor decision makers.
- Whether studying films at school is as important as studying literature? 55
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one does in her day to day activity is a result of conscious or subconscious deci...
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...cision that they made before the action.These decision may affect them personally or ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...ffecting a large group of people like a nation wide or a company wide change, and it is bas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, as to, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73626373626 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54555299734 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9506162511 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241861373305 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975571218894 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406792185969 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125492396296 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035070881038 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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