People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Within the two systems of thinking that are permanently applied by people, the emotional one responds for temporary desires and cannot account the long-term effects. This claim supports the viewpoint that the decision-making which is based on emotional patterns is less efficient than a complex reasoning process. Personally, I posit that people have to beware emotional decision making, though in critical situations they should be able to produce fast solutions.
Primarily, impulsive decision-making endangers the final result of a project or work. Further justification of a decision accepted in a hasty manner will certainly be poor and lacking supportive arguments. To illustrate that, one may consider the reasons of mortgage market boom in 2007-2008s. It was not a secret that the market exploded because of unreasonable demand for fast mortgage credit. The managers of the investment banks, such as Morgan&Stanley and Deutsche Bank, manipulated the securities without deep consideration. The scope further financial crisis serves as the evidence of impulsive decision-making.
The next reason for conscious acceptance of decision is that it helps to optimize the resources. When a plan is thought through enough, a team can distribute the capital needed for its implementation appropriately. For example, I worked with the international students on launching a venture in social entrepreneurship. Before opening the company, we had to make a business plan with cost distribution scheme. With a precise definition of the cost of materials, we managed to prove to investors that all the invested money would be spent efficiently. In this way, it is crucial to present the logical argumentation of a deal, and only in the last turn to rely on emotions.
On the contrary to presented reasons, fast thinking is necessary when a situation os critical and needs a quick solution. For example, when my mother was about to give a birth to my brother, she relied on her emotions and told my father to bring her to the hospital. The deep reasoning was inappropriate in that situation because it would damage the health of a baby. My father made a decision to drive my mom to the hospital quickly, and the doctors managed to help he bear a child. Thus, in critical cases, a person should accept the decisions without hesitation, while the overall point about the importance of reasoning remains clear.
To conclude, before making a decision, a person needs to back it up with logical arguments. The opposite approach will undermine the total outcome of a deal and cause disaster. Despite that, when there is no time for profound argumentation, it is necessary to accept a decision quickly and in accordance with the best possible outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...er justification of a decision accepted in a hasty manner will certainly be poor and lacking supp...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...idence of impulsive decision-making. The next reason for conscious acceptance of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358276644 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12811442083 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569160997732 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.912824627 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.391304348 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1739130435 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95652173913 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264003229916 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687765184591 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658965709468 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146488450846 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467730680014 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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