Decision making is one of the core abilities humans acquire over a period of time with patience, adamant skills and thoughts. Decisions taken by individuals, irrespective of the situation they are in, should be conclusive, thoughtful and beneficial in the long journey of life. Now the statement speaks that decisions are taken in an emotional frame of mind, with one 'feelings' into consideration, might be destructive for us because of the process involved in it. I totally agree with the statement considering the situations taken by people in such cases are highly personal, are a matter of having or depicting the pride one has over something. Such decisions are taken when a bloke has to decide between commodities or actions that have either hurt them to the vein or have thrown them into pits of extreme trouble or melancholy. But decisions once taken, should be rational, thoughtful and should be the ones, the individual should always champion for. Just choosing options out of a few based on some incident they've faced or a period of extreme disappointment they have gone through, is one of the most common aspects we witness, in mankind. This not only indicates upcoming adverse consequences but also shows the way the human mind interacts with logic, reasoning, and emotion. Such individuals might suffer in the long road towards success, determination, and patience. However, I think one of the most innate abilities of we humans, is to believe that anything is possible, and most of the scenarios, our failures teach us to stand affront with our failures, have them as badges of pride and hard work and work upon ourselves to make our own better versions for tomorrow.
The best thing about emotional decisions taking by man is the constant fear or motivation, one has in mind in achieving a goal or a task in a predefined amount of time. This not only motivates us to hustle hard, better every day but be more diligent, and efficient in our own walks of life. Emotional decisions, taken in the time of failures, sorrow or defeats play the most crucial role in redefining the meaning of hard work and the importance of coming back hard after rejection and lows. Losses are some of the abstract inhibitors that determine the amount of hardwork one puts in achieving something of utmost importance and value. Now, the most important thing behind decisions based on emotional reactions or consequences is the level of rationality and the number of emotions involved in it. Having a constant frame of mind in a similar emotion would be beneficial in some cases, but mixed emotions scenarios are never the ideal frames of mind, in taking the appropriate decision based on any factor existing in this world.
The best way in which a person can understand or take the decision is by commensurating between the emotional or the logic behind a certain action or decision. Also having 100% of emotion and zero logic in a decision is predominantly why people fail and go through the same phases of life, again. Having some amount of valid reason and support behind any action not only gives him a chance to rectify on the mistakes he did but also act as a defensive measure when such actions are needed to be explained to oneself or any other third party, for that matter. Definitely, emotions give us the required impetus in being constantly motivated while acquiring a specific thing, but all emotions and no logic makes the decision full of uncertainties and could be fatal sometime in the near future.Hence, a perfect blend of emotion, and rational in conceiving a decision is one of the most intrinsic qualities a man should possess to learn the values of the life and expectiations.
- 'The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the 89
- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 16
- "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen mo 55
- Argument Topic: "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced 52
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...he core abilities humans acquire over a period of time with patience, adamant skills and thoug...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one feeling', 'a feeling', or simply 'feelings'?
Suggestion: one feeling; a feeling; feelings
...ken in an emotional frame of mind, with one feelings into consideration, might be destructiv...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...ons out of a few based on some incident theyve faced or a period of extreme disappoint...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rd after rejection and lows. Losses are some of the abstract inhibitors that determine the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ic behind a certain action or decision. Also having 100% of emotion and zero logic i...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ld be fatal sometime in the near future.Hence, a perfect blend of emotion, and ration...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, third, while, as to, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 58.6224719101 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3070.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 629.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88076311606 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00798087137 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7738024711 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492845786963 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 992.7 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0822273518 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.45 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223027679725 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071831125132 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503882105157 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155406466066 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353987948487 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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