I mostly agree with the statement that people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic are poor decision makers. However, there are circumstances where I disagree with this statement.
First, decisions made based on emotion are often made rashly and not thought out. A person could make a poor decision on impulse, and then not wanting to feel guilty after, justify their decision with twisted, self-serving logic. For example, let's say that a person breaks up with their significant other after seeing texts from someone of the opposite sex. However, it turns out the texts were just from a family member. To justify their decision to break up, they tell themselves their partner was a horrible person anyway. This case has lead to a decision made rashly that had poor consequence. It is associated with poor decision making skills.
There's another reason why making decisions based on emotion and later justifying those decisions with logic is a poor decision making process. This is because it makes the person extremely biased in their justifications. In other words, it doesn't matter what decision he or she makes, they'll justify it in their head to free themselves of guilt or responsibility. Let's look at an example of infidelity again. In this case, one partner has been having an affair because he or she believed his or her partner was having an affair. They have justified this poor decision with this logic: "If my partner can have an affair, so can I." This shows extreme bias, since most people know cheating is wrong. This person is only looking to placate their guilt.
However, there are circumstances where making decisions based on emotion and justifying those decisions with logic could be a good decision making strategy. For instance, consider a person who has great intuition, and is quick to react under pressure and emotion. If a person works as a firefighter, which requires quick reactions under pressure, they may have to make decisions based on emotion instead of rationally thinking out a solution beforehand. In this case, they will later be able to logically justify their living-saving decisions.
Most poor decisions based on emotion and justified with logic are made by poor decision makers. However, people who consistently make beneficial decisions based on emotions would be able to logically justify them, as well as being considered a good decision maker.
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 75
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Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221276595745 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.195744680851 0.157235817809 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0659574468085 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0531914893617 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659574468085 0.0444667217837 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0978723404255 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0659574468085 0.0406280797675 162% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72447701403 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.030933414821 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0106382978723 0.0016655270985 639% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0723404255319 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148936170213 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191489361702 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2476.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 452.878318584 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205 0.200843997647 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12 0.132149295362 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72447701403 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 52.548173154 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1818181818 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5085248605 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.545454545 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.674092028746 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 47.1818181818 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.22297297297 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488671656973 0.391690518653 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11869623761 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0794937443333 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46321019052 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146061529085 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170516898066 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198171784085 0.0892212321368 222% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293416257616 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0389947496671 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394786502235 0.275328986314 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171789806764 0.0653680567796 263% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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