People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Attitude of people can be defined as how a person behaves and interacts with the others, considering their sensitivity, surroundings and variety of social aspects. Thus, one can understand that someone’s attitude is a mixture of plethora of factors that have influenced to him or her. Given this property of attitude, some argue that attitudes are determined by the immediate situations or surroundings, whereas some assert that primary factor of causation of attitude is the impact of society that he or she belongs to. Apparently, both arguments seem plausible, however, I agree that the immediate situations or surroundings have a greater influence on people’s attitude.
Admittedly, as mentioned above, society functions a pivotal role in people’s attitude by regulating and subsidizing their current conditions. Through conducting the campaign about recycling, for example, society control the attitude of people about environments and induce people to have more discreet attitude with wastes. What happens in the society affects people even if the occurrence of an event doesn't impact people directly. Therefore, people’s attitudes are indeed affected by acts in society.
Nevertheless, the aforementioned reason does not warrant that the immediate situations or surroundings have a lesser effects on people’s attitude. Although people are willing to change their attitude by the atmosphere of society, they determine their attitude based on the current condition of their situation. From the example above, someone could decide to remain constant because there are still a number of wastes near one’s society or he or she has no time to recycle. In addition, the situation people are placed in has a much significant impact on their lives, because they have a tremendous effect on their feelings. Emotions change constantly, at every moment, and they are the driving forces one's attitudes.
Moreover, what or who people surrounded with also has great influence as the attitude is defined as how a person interacts with others. If people are raised in a loving household and surrounded with positive friends, it is highly likely that they will retain a sanguine outlook on life, and be more cordial to others. Familial background or people that someone interacts with are important because it is the main element that forms people's perspectives, characteristics, and their attitudes. It lives with them forever.
In conclusion, even though society does play a crucial role in people's attitudes, it has a less influence than immediate situation or surroundings. Though someone’s attitude is a mixture of every factor that have affected to him or her, the immediate situations or surroundings have a greater influence on people’s attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54566744731 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13202935915 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489461358314 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8037270907 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.631578947 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258212288229 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092095748774 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431160146441 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161510397595 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127287828928 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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