People's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making.
People' behavior is like air direction in atmosphere, they will change at any time, in shorts, people's behavior and air flowing directions are unpredictable. The author cited that forces determine people’s behavior. In addition that, this behavior is not of their own making. Therefore, I concede that this statement is true to some extent.
This is indeed true that, if any human want to know other human attitude, they can get basic result by checking that person's friends, society, cast. This method is not much accurate but give some ideas. In college groups, there are different kind of students study with together. They spare much of time with their friends. For instance, in some college groups, there are students that are smoke, drink alcohol and do many more bad things. However, in that group some student cannot does these bad things, albeit, sometimes students forces them to smoke one time and then, other student affected by this. Hence, one can get fundamentally assume that every student in that group are smokers. In conclusion, student they are not smoker but their around environment changed.
Many other factors directly effect on people's behavior and also alter that behavior. For example, recently, if children birth place are Syria. So, they are leave in place of war, they are seen guns, bombs from childhood. Although, if some child birth in rich family of United States, that children grow up with peaceful environment. Consequently, comparing to these children, child of Syria are more aggressive. Hence, children attitude are by their around environment.
Although, individual responsibility plays a vital role in determining the behavior of people.
Any Students, children, politician behavior are determined by around environment. Nevertheless, this is not always true. If person set a goal in their mind then, any external forces could not change their decision. In conclusion, people's behavior are largely determined by forces, but they can change by their own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...es determine people's behavior. In addition that, this behavior is not of their own...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... In college groups, there are different kind of students study with together. They s...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ude are by their around environment. Although, individual responsibility plays a vita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31347962382 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68218412736 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3518222196 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6956521739 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8695652174 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.60869565217 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306445544873 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919750949068 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139568504995 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195679350117 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147341154011 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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