People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is contentious about the inquisition that whether people's behavior is based on exterior forces instead of interior ones. While different theories were drawn by scientists and there is less likely to be any persuasive conclusion, I believe that people's behavior is decided jointly by external forces as well as their willingness.
First and foremost, a person cannot decide about their birth place and the culture under which they are bred. Thus, some kind of behaviors related to certain cultures should be decided by their living environments. For example, eating with chopsticks is common in China but rare in western countries. Because people around the world have different eating habits and different kinds of foods that partly restricted by the natural and geological environment of their settlement. People cannot choose their racial, appearance, voice and gender etc. In a word, it is indisputable that there are external forces that restrain us from become totally free and doing things arbitrarily. Even the almighty gods depicted in various myths have their boundedness.
On the other hand, behaviors germane to personal preferences like what movie to watch, or what kinds of music to listen, can be largely decided by people's own making. Especially in modern societies where democracy and free will are advocated and respected, it is hardly the case that a person will be abused or punished for choosing something he/she like. From this perspective, the claim is totally overstated. I concede that during the history there were times that external forces, for example, from rulers were exerted on people were fierce and even merciless. But that is why the tyranny was overthrown by reforms and revolutions in the end.
There are insurmountable limits for human beings, such as physical limits like being underwater for too long or flying to the sky like a bird. But that is why people build submarine and airplanes to achieve these goals. In my view, the endeavor to challenge our limits is appreciable and the most meaningful thing in our lives. At the same time, free will should be preserved and respected, for people to make choices based on their willingness and live a life in which they can orientate themselves.
All in all, people's behavior is determined by both exterior forces and interior willingness. Otherwise, if exterior forces steer the whole process, no one would be willing to try hard to achieve their dreams, to make any differences or even to love the life he/she live. And we have also to admit that there are obstacles for some cases that people cannot surpass due to the limit of human beings.
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- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 75
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08275862069 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66051609364 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5626584981 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157585638072 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459716508199 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306069558035 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921393988708 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014295134781 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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