"Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown."
A great society has a set of firm beliefs with a strong will of togetherness. Allowing free thought and individuality to grow from within. This freedom of thought and individuality pushes the boundaries to surpass the limits of comfort into the innovative future. It is those progressive individuals whose ideas push the society forward. From the beginning of mankind using rocks to creating arrows for the hunt. Another example is the great leap into flight around the world. Lastly, modern medicine, the field of always risking a leap of faith to move forward. In order to have a great society there needs to be a step forward into the unknown.
There is an archive that contains the remains of tools used by the ancestors of mankind. Scientist have provided proof that throughout our early nomadic ancestry some small groups died out because the unreliability of the tools used to hunt. Moving forward to other groups that survived, the remains of their tools displayed an intelligent thought process that allows progression to grow. It is because of these early ancestral nomads, whose intelligence allowed manipulation of tools to benefit a hunt, that mankind was able to become a unique creature of original thought.
With a developed mind waiting for the next step forward, history will always remember two brothers who changed the world as we know it. The Wright brothers, two gentlemen who wondered; “what would it be like to fly?” Creating a new form of transportation was a leap because automobiles, trains, and ships were all established forms of transportation that were functional and established. But these two brothers decided to move out of the comfort zone and create a change in the world that was unexpectedly significant. From how wars are fought to the creation of commercial airlines, the modern life of flight as we know is a result of two individuals who took a big step into the unknown.
Stepping into the undiscovered has become a profession for many. A medical scientist, for example, move modern medicine forward by experimenting with multiple variables. The medical field has progressed and changed for the better because of the constant push from scientist to move out of the comfort zone. Progression is the reason a modern society can have branches of healthcare sectors specializing in leading robotics to the next drug regimen for a cure for cancer.
A sedimentary society is a weak society. Researching the unknown can reinvent the tools used for hunting, allow humans to take the sky in flight, and can create a field to cure the next illness. Progression creates a constant push of the bar to improve life, which makes a society become a great one.
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- "Progress should be the aim of any great society. People too often cling unnecessarily to obsolete ways of thinking and acting because of both a high comfort level and a fear of the unknown." 58
- You will be given a statement that presents an issue you need to respond to, along with detailed instructions on how to respond to the statement. You have 30 minutes to plan and compose a response in which you develop an argument according to the instruct 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kes a society become a great one.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06888888889 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84484719371 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495555555556 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2838070122 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1739130435 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.39130434783 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102034380427 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301843378669 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304712250768 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570238082576 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168057452184 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.