The purpose of art is to upset; The function of science is to reassure.
With the advent of science there are new frontiers that are opening day by day. These are helping us understand very intricate subtleties of the humankind as well as nature around us. How we are made, how universe is made and so on are possible to be slightly understood now because of science. But it is not necessarily true that science is only helping to reassure us or helping to make us understand things around us. Similarly, the purpose of art is not solely to upset us. It can also motivate us, make us happy, satisfied, and decrease our stress and anxiety. To support my definition, I will present examples in the passage below.
First of all, it is true that science is helping us to understand our human body structure and how human being is designed or evolved. But, as we explore more about human body, the more complex it becomes. This make us think how can something as arcane as this can be designed by someone, who can think of such a complex machine. Hence, in this scenario, science is not helping us reassure that we are not made by some supernatural force. It made us think that there is some divine force which is responsible for designing the human, nature, and species around us. We are not made due to evolution that science is trying to support.
Certainly, science help us to reassure also. In earlier times human being tend to think of lighting in cloud to be an anger from the god, but science helped us understand that this is nothing but just a natural phenomenon. Similarly, science helped us understand various phenomenon such as climate change, how to tackle with climate change, make us believe that we can live even if we get some fatal diseases, which was not possible earlier. Therefore, science helps us to reassure us but also sometimes bewilder us.
Similarly, we cannot just say that art is there to upset us. Whenever we see something beautiful it makes our mind relaxed and stress free, increasing our productivity and longevity. Additionally, whenever we see dance, arts work, painting, etc. we get to know about the mindset and thinking of other people. These things make us happy and satisfied and also sometimes motivates us to do the same. However, it is true that when we see a hungry child in painting we feel sad, but we also feel motivated to do something for mankind. Therefore, art play one of the important role in helping the human to be happy as well as to see the surrounding reality. As it is aptly said, a picture is worth a thousand words, similarly, art helps us convey a message in the most apt way, which can sometime upset us, but can also help in making us joyous.
As, we have seen above, domain of science cannot be just limited to reassuring us, it can also make things around us more obscure and complex. Similarly, art is just not to upset us, it can make things around us lively and happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... Certainly, science help us to reassure also. In earlier times human being tend to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 33.0505617978 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59338521401 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52015524432 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43579766537 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9747131403 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.037037037 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.51851851852 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113768533792 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528139499788 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705837853253 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822876399859 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190140912435 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.