The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
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Therefore, a musician's talent should be assessed during his/her lifetime rather than assessing one's talent in the music industry after one's death.
A musician shows variety of talents be it on a stage or in composition during his/her lifetime.It would be great if he/she gets credit of his/her talent duriung his/her lifetime.For example, Indian singer/musician A R Rehman has acheived has composed great music and it wouldn't be fault if he is assessed of his talents during his lifetime.Futhermore, critics/people who assess one's talent in the music industry should not be persuaded by one's fame.
Additionally, a musican can improve upon his weaknesses during his lifetime if he is genuinely assessed.In fact, his fame would be by-product of his talent, rather than fame being the hurdle for assessment of talent.To illustrate the above fact, Rihanna, a singer cum musician was praised and criticised for some of the songs she wrote.This form of assessment not only help the singer to improve, if he/she takes this in a positive way, it eventually leads to the betterment of any budding musician with great talents.
While it may be true that after one's demise, their true contribution is found, it doesn't guarentte the accurate assessment of a musician's talent. Not to ignore the fact that if the musician is compared with another musician of similar talent, people may get to see a different innovative way of performing the same music.If the assessment of talent of a musician is genrations after his/her demise then it would pose the treat of evolution. In other words, in subsequent generations the music may change.
Hence, a musician's talent should be assessed during one's lifetime rather than generations after one's demise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17253521127 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99036963492 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.342847208 60.3974514979 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.857142857 118.986275619 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 23.4991977007 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.21951772744 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268518482457 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143462233004 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680130353173 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176933676707 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362517485081 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 14.1392134831 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 48.8420337079 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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