The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Music plays a dominant role in our daily life. It contains mixture of emotions which one can feel when they listen to it. It lessens our stress and normalizes our thoughts. The persons who compose these beautiful songs are called musicians. Synonym of musician is composer. I strongly oppose the author thesis which states the honest assessment can given only after that particular musician death.
In the world, where there are many inventors, there exits critics. Based on the critics reviews and ratings, once talent is assessed. This is a genreal perception exits every where. In order to be a musician, first one should have an understading on the music. He must be creative in thinking and composing. Without these one cannot excel is their respective fields. The one who have background support and money can sustain for hardly few years, if he lack talent.
Talent is something which one cannot buy with money. One should earn from their own dedication, hardwork and creativity. The current music industry is providng platform to many young talented persons who don't have any fame. Through one's composition, popularity is being established. Once musicians are recognised, they are striving hard to showcase many new tunes. Fame and assessment are completely interdependent. Fame depends on assessment but the reverse is not true. If a composer is having huge popularity that means he being assessed by critics or public. Audiance or viewers will give honest reviews. There are very few people who may completely support or oppose the musician irrespective of the tempo or tune.
A.R.Rahman is a popular musician. He composed hunderds of songs. He is famous for the music beats. He even won Oscar award. His fame started in the native state and raised to country and then to world. He is just 50 years old. If he won't maintain the creativity then his fame and popularity level decelerates to zero. There exits some crazy fans but the fame get deteriorated if audiences are not happy with his music. If one thinks that the assessment can be done accuratley only after the decades of musican death then oscar awards will be only given to the deceased persons but not to the emerging musicians. There should not be any award ceremonies where composers are being identified and encoraged.
Since I have provided irrefutable evidence in the support of my stance, I would like to conclude by argument by re-iterating that the talent of a popular musicians can be assessed accurately when they are alive only. It is not required for any one to wait for generations to assess.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97690531178 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66550923648 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54272517321 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0075553019 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5714285714 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3714285714 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.828571428571 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258530661379 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632448230231 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536311123392 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152894059096 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522803867385 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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