People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
People primarily enroll in a college or university to achieve necessary education and to get a degree to build proper career. By entering the college it can be assumed that one can get lot many job opportunities provided one should have strong determination and strong will to achieve. Social status of the person will be increased. There are mainly two reasons why a person should study in university.
First reason is that the person will have many new experiences. To study in the university one has to leave the home and stay in hostels. As a result people tend to be more independent instead of depending upon the family and friends. One has to do many part time jobs in order to pay the tuition fees and for their own living expenses. From this one can know the value of money and spend carefully. University consists of people from many countries having different culture and traditions. As a result people speak different languages. This makes people tend to expose to various languages and culture. For example, in my college I can find students from China, South Africa and many other countries. Initially it was very difficult for them to communicate to the staff in administrative office. Later they slowly started learning the local language of the region and finally one fine day they are able to speak very fluently. These students won’t take much time to adjust themselves if they shift to some other country for research purpose.
Second reason is that the world is full of unemployment. Demand for jobs is more but the vacancies are less. Short listing the people for interview is done based on the number of degrees one have. It is always safe and better to have extra degrees. In 1990’s, a person should have at least SSC certificate to get the job. After 10 years they made +2 education degree as basic. Nowadays under graduate degree is mandatory. We don’t know what will be basic degree in the next 10 years. So, it will always good to have career preparations.
As I have provided irrefutable evidence in the support of stance, I would to reiterate my opinion by station that it is always good for the people to attend the university for a better career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... family and friends. One has to do many part time jobs in order to pay the tuition fees a...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aving different culture and traditions. As a result people speak different languag...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t least SSC certificate to get the job. After 10 years they made +2 education degree ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, as to, at least, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77165354331 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63795849641 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538057742782 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4074777741 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6538461538 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291905433648 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712758002932 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705740227106 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181416327209 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759193860662 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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