Schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of childhood.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your positions.
When we say Non - academic skills it encompasses all the activities that helps us to grow as better human being physically , mentally and socially. These are sports, arts , culture and along with developing various non cognitive skills such as soft skill , interpersonal skills, cooperation skills, grits and 21st century skills etc that are not score or test based . According to the report of a Journal of educational research magazine" Most of schools and education institutions have realized the fact that gone are those days a parents use to think there is no future in sports and arts and most of the students even want to grow their career in the field of sports , arts . Hence they are working to bring a great change in their traditional curriculum that would focus more and more on sports and co curricular activities.
Today we being in stiff competition zone Where it wont be wrong to say the situation of " survival of fittest" is prevailing all over the world in every field. these non cognitive traits help you to keep int-acted with your goal and efforts. for example Soft skills and interpersonal skills have become important for our growth and development almost all the sectors business , corporate, politics etc. these adds plus point to our personality and attitude . A corporate research magazine states that " the employee sound with non cognitive traits are more able to handle the pressure tackle the situation in better way hence reaches to top of the corporate ".
Thus, To Sum up schools and educational institution of today's should rejuvenate their cliche academic approach. and should prioritize non academic activities besides the normal academic methodology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, thus, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81602930168 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5530202769 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 7.80617977528 410% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134898355697 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053224152798 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447615103657 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095086365889 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264782108283 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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