Schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood.

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Schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood.

In schools, we mostly learn about information that enhances our academic profile. That information often includes the use of grammar in language and the application of mathematics. Although this type of information is critical in our development before becoming an adult, there are other aspects that schools should also focus on in order to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood. Non-academic aspects include knowledge for the job market, information on how to prepare and deal with governmental documents, and knowledge about insurance. These are inevitable parts of an adult’s life. Therefore, schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood.

First, being adult involves having a job that you can rely on for your own life. Knowledge for the job market is something that schools often miss out. In order to prepare a student for entering the job market in adulthood, the schools should provide adequate knowledge or information for students about jobs and careers. For example, interviewing skill is an important piece of information that would benefit a student when s/he enters the job market. If a student acquires this knowledge, s/he would be better prepared for getting a job when s/he becomes an adult. Another example is that students often have to go to the career center for themselves regarding to the job market. For those who do not think getting a job is important or are not in a hurry of getting a job while studying, they are missing out this important knowledge. Therefore, schools should do something in order to prepare all students for this non-academic aspect of adulthood.

Second, adults usually have citizen responsibilities that include dealing with different governmental documents, unlike students. In normal school settings, students do not learn this type of knowledge. For example, learning how to file tax returns is an essential knowledge in the United States. Although it is something that all citizens should do, it is surprising that this knowledge is not provided in schools. In order to acquire this knowledge, students have to discover themselves through surfing on the Internet or asking their parents. If the schools can provide knowledge about this particular non-academic aspect, students would definitely benefit from it.

Third, insurance is a significant part of everyone’s life, but no schools are preparing this information for student. The society encourages adults to have insurance for themselves, and also demands adults to buy insurance for their kids. However, for nearly everyone, having a lack of knowledge in insurance is prevalent. This is one of the most important non-academic aspects of adulthood. For example, there are adults that do not buy insurance until accidents happen. Often times, it is too late to compensate for the loss they have suffered. Car insurance is another example. Most people do not care about car insurance until they get a car. Nevertheless, most people in the United States own a car. If schools can provide this type of knowledge beforehand, students can surely be better prepared. Having knowledge about insurance can better prepare students when they run into these situations as an adult.

Although knowledge that is currently provided in schools is critical in our development before becoming an adult, there are other aspects that schools should also focus on in order to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood. Some important non-academic aspects of adulthood include knowledge for the job market, information on how to prepare and deal with governmental documents, and knowledge about insurance. Because every student would eventually encounter these problems when they turn into an adult, schools should do something that prepare students for adulthood.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3258.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 604.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3940397351 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92063304168 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.370860927152 0.4932671777 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1016.1 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8596097479 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512355740105 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167905665951 0.0831039109588 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197824148218 0.0758088955206 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379337102427 0.150359130593 252% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141222563154 0.0667264976115 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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