The Song of the celebration of the end of autumn frost, he brought in the kind of the light-the sun, it melted away. Water, grass, and she fell down at the feet of a golden quiver. For he is alone, walking in the field, to write a good essay, a story to the fidelity of the day is breaking. And it came to pass a long time, I almost forgot the other countries, except this time, my dear master of the grammar learned in all the wisdom, Again he shines upon all. I hope that once sat on the desk so that I was left to my left and to my classmates. As of today, all the faces of those lost. In the winter, live as foreigners with the promise, Skateboarding has not yet begun. Master, I, being in the retirement age, he can not even die at the sight of the social networks.
The fall is over, my last goodbye is set to be delivered to my affection, has nowhere to go now. Here is this story.
1000 2 14 year, or in 2014, he was old enough to drive a car, was the least I go out with the teacher. My old apartment into a rusty as an old people neglected and living in the world might find unpleasant. And to share the bathroom with laundry people living in the same area. Is common both to the study of his other place of strength: the bed, where William lives. One morning as I walked by my local cafe, Mark asked, "Did you see the new girl in town? She really is a lorem!
"So they licked?" Jason walks and skipping past us.
It matters not what answer to them. Focusing with me, What is more, an envelope, blank, not to me, but only one was seen in erat viverra ornare. The sun was not in vain, those who demonstrate their couches, a Paper within the few. * I was curious as it was in the inscriptions in an unknown crazy, dangerous chemicals. So it decided to open what is inside without breaking.
So to my colleague borrowing encompassed June. Who, together with their own, beginning with the computer, not for the purpose, first, that there are certain things in front of their spare time. And soon I see decides to despatch a secret love or an advertisement to the lender.
- Homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last year that region experienced twenty days with below-average temperatures, and local weather forecasters throughout 55
- “To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.” Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 33
- Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and 95
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, as for, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24189526185 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38791070223 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583541147132 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8608175999 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.875 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.7083333333 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.20833333333 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801339065341 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190430191601 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288403614721 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04222287437 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317810631602 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 14.1392134831 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 48.8420337079 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.1639044944 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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