Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated using, for instance, community service programmes, before being re-introduced to society.

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Should criminals be punished with lengthy jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated using, for instance, community service programmes, before being re-introduced to society.

Whether we should apply custodial or non-custodial sentences have been still a hot debate for many years. However, nowadays, in a civilized society, it’s found that the use of non-custodial sentences is more and more popular. In many aspects, there’s nothing surprising here. That’s because non-custodial sentences have graduallly been showing their undeniable advantages over the traditional punishment of imprisonment.

First of all, it’s necessary to mention the financial benefits the use of the rehabilitation of criminals bring about, especially, when the expenses for detaining a prison per year reportedly can exceed the average income of an ordinary person. Therefore, it’s quite unreasonable for the gorvenment to spend such a large sum of money from people’s tax each year on good-for-nothing men, the criminals. Particularly, recent initial statistics reveals that there’s a drastic increase in the prison population, leading to the inevitable huge spending. In that context, the use of non-custodial sentences could help alleviate the swelling of state budget spending on detaining criminals. Through programmes for re-education and rehabilitation of criminals, such as community service programmes, they themselves can earn money for their living, thus it’s possible for the State to cut down unessential expenses for them, if not to say to partly improve their living standard in prisons. Who knows ? Perhaps, their labours even could make significant contributions to the overall economy as well.

Also, another reason leading to the wide application of non-custiodial sentences is the ineffectiveness of prison but not anything else. There’s no point in putting somebody in a building just to punish them, and let them come out no better. It’s reported that the re-offending rate of criminals put into prison is significantly high compared to that reeducate and rehabilitated. So there’s an obvious fact here that prison seldom can do anything but harden prisoners and turn them back into their sinful pathways when released.

On the contrary, re-education and rehabilitation have allegedly been proving their effectiveness over imprisonment – 20 percent more effective in reducing reoffending. That’s because of the humanitarian nature of the sentences of this kind. This point appears in that they would give the offenders another chance to rebuild their life and reintegrate into society. Centers for reeducation and rehabilitation, like vocational centers, would make them grip some jobs, and in this way help them be able to live by their own labours without repeatedly breaking the law. Therefore, they gradually could become good civilians and reintegrate into society again. In addition, this method also discriminates the treatment between major and minor offences, deliberate and unintentional ones etc… As a result, it’s possible to define who have the capacity for improvement and let them restart their life. Furthermore, while speaking about this point, it’s impossible not to mention a no-less-important facet, that’s the compensation the criminals have to make for society. Needless to say, the utilization of rehabilitation, such as community service programmes, is one of the best way for the offenders to pay back to society , or in other words, to make good the damage to the victims and society, in both financial and emotional sense.

After all, want it or not, the use of non-custodial sentences such as reeducation and rehabilitation should be used more and more commonly. Yet, there’s nothing worrying here, because over time they have been proven one of the most effective and meaningful ways to reduce offences as well as reoffences.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, in addition, speaking about, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3205.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65255731922 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29189987385 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1000.8 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.98474898 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.541666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.21951772744 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152363604461 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038964661267 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467944860176 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822190085051 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03872958103 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 100.480337079 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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