Should every student have the same curriculum before college

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Should every student have the same curriculum before college

The idea of having the same curriculum may look sophisticated at first but we need to understand the underlying key issues at first. As per my understanding of the nation, I disagree with the proposed issue.

We first need to understand what a nation is made up of? A nation like India is made of several ethnicities which have their different cultures with them. For example, we may say different cultures in the states of Northern India while there is a totally different culture in southern India. so, when we have different cultures in different states it is highly impossible to implement the same national curriculum for all the students.

The second point which comes here is the language barriers which can be observed in different states. Though we are going to implement the same curriculum we can not include every language in the curriculum as there are hundreds of languages spoken in different states and it is imaginable that every student will be comfortable with the single language chosen by the curriculum, Moreover as we are people of culture everyone has that feeling of superiority for their own language and if we impose the restriction of a single language it will be a point of conflict.

The third point to look at here is about the interest of a particular student. If a student wishes to pursue his college education in a field of research and development of an issue particular to his native region but doesn't have any basic education about an issue because of a single national curriculum then it may cause serious damage to the student during his college studies also, there will be a slight possibility that student may not be able to put a fruitful insight during his college discussion or student may lose his interest about a particular issue.

Lastly, Though we are able to overcome some of the above-listed problems it will be very hard to implement a single national curriculum because as humans we have a tendency to reluct to any changes happening in a stable thing. So, there may be opposition by different society segments like Language Scholars, Native Leaders, Religion Advocates, etc., and rather than being a progressive point for the society it will become a major point of conflict.

So, It is advisable to renew a curriculum according to different regions which will have a stable mixture of all the progressive things like Coding. Advanced Mathematics, Science, etc. according to native regions rather than implementing a single curriculum for all the students.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, third, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95990566038 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81914413381 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436320754717 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.675459622 60.3974514979 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.2 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2666666667 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210610445582 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634412624262 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626054891019 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106412872184 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428990726719 0.0667264976115 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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