Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents
Everyone in this world was born with some kind of talent, but most of the times they were common among us like reading quickly, problem-solving etc. But, some people were born with exceptional talents which make them stand from rest of the world. Such people may get better results if they were identified during their childhood and was given proper training. It is even more effective to give training from childhood as there were minimal external factors influencing children at that stage. Therefore, Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Firstly, Some children who were born with special talents may not get access to resources that makes them use their talents effectively. This is due to many factors such as low financial background, geographical and cultural conditions of the country/state in which he was born and so on. For example, A child might be good at playing football from childhood but the lack of football training institutes in his availability inevitably hinders his skill in football. This type of conditions should not prevent a child from growing in his special talents.
In addition, Identifying and training of a child from early stages save a lot of money and time for them. Some people recognise their special talents after reaching adulthood and feel that they do not have enough time to excel in their inherent talents. Even though they find time to work on them, they feel it like a waste of money. So, if society can find such kind of people in advance and give them proper training, it might save them valuable assets like time and money.
Finally, proper training from early stages will make a child advance more rapidly when he becomes an individual. As he was given training from childhood, he will become proficient in those areas and is more likely to reach success. For instance, Virat Kohli, famous Indian cricket player, was joined in cricket academy when he was 13 by his mother, who recognised his exceptional talent in playing cricket. He said in an interview that the training he got from his childhood helped a lot throughout his career.
In conclusion, Society plays a major role in finding special talents in children and training them accordingly so that they can triumph in their respective careers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240740740741 0.238963963785 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.157407407407 0.154291517835 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902777777778 0.0886310499679 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393518518519 0.0506014161523 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.087962962963 0.0449626384858 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.148148148148 0.123526278965 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0379742944744 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51747793102 2.82910677849 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162037037037 0.0316879551592 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0578703703704 0.0950106342287 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231481481481 0.0245489744465 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0157978311181 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2352.0 2899.98275862 81% => OK
No of words: 396.0 478.390804598 83% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93939393939 6.0591788892 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.65681771538 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353535353535 0.369966551584 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277777777778 0.285172536893 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174242424242 0.207245337619 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0959595959596 0.136322040163 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51747793102 2.82910677849 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 234.298850575 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.492565540709 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.4382804576 56.8184620615 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 21.1264367816 85% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.7468607788 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3808425214 62.0618507366 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 143.81877709 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.7468607788 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.728815259664 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.71264367816 26% => OK
Readability: 49.7777777778 52.2641144681 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.51219512195 1.64547068916 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380389198558 0.39480681544 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153215575876 0.11556216369 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0809552489355 0.0736162880345 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534618889134 0.531340600358 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135795761647 0.15197228837 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152415640094 0.158818324754 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207661847297 0.0851127212816 244% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234787228468 0.388921930462 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101966265057 0.0677916285025 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230662264372 0.28015025965 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103485829088 0.0610219844235 170% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.8591954023 120% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30459770115 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.96264367816 40% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.10632183908 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 15.0862068966 93% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.0 Out of 6