Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is not uncommon for people to argue that the most talented children should be selected and nurtured as early as possible. Proponents of this view is that the talented people can make more contribution to the society if they are distinguished at an early age. However, some people will argue, does it put too much pressure on a little kid? In fact, I suppose to identify and train a talented kid is not a good idea.
The primary goal of this suggestion is understandable, as when kids are being defined as genuine, they would have chance to receive better education to match their ability. As the normal circulation may be too easy for them to learn, and it is a waste for time. For example, many universities have founded a class for talented kids which is far below the normal age for entering college. In such class, they can learn to solve challenging problems. In addition, the society will spare no effort to provide them enough money to support their study, which prevent children lack of money from quitting school.
However, it comes with a problem that how to define a truly talented person? The standard of talent can be so complicated that talent can be divided into several fields such as academic performance, art skills or even cooking skills. Should all these skills be taken into consideration? The answer is probably not. Although more fields are considered, the more promotion will make from the talented person, society would not provide enough resource to train. What's more, talent for science and art may be beneficial for the society as science improvement can make life more efficiently as well as art can enliven the whole society. Nevertheless, for some talents such as easy to sleep or good temper may not be considered as importance, since not only these talents cannot be trained, but also they are useless for the improvement of the society.
The third problem is whether the talent for a person is wrongly detected or if the talent eliminates as kid growing up. A Chines ancient story shows a kid who is talented at writing consistently is required by his father to write without absorbing new knowledge, in the end, the kid become a normal person. The story tells us it may not be a good approach to train a talented kid from an early age. The reason is that firstly he or she have no time to learn new things because they are immersed in the honor of being talented, and the second is that they don't have time to play with others which is also necessary for them to grow healthy. The third reason is that too much anticipation and pressure are provided for such young kids which will do harm to their physical and mental health. We should obey the regulation in nature to let them grow healthy.
In conclusion, I don't think it is a good suggestion to detect and train a young talented children for they may lose their talent through too much pressure and too high anticipation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...d not provide enough resource to train. Whats more, talent for science and art may be...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A chine' or simply 'Chines'?
Suggestion: A chine; Chines
...he talent eliminates as kid growing up. A Chines ancient story shows a kid who is talent...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e. The reason is that firstly he or she have no time to learn new things because the...
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Line 7, column 556, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g talented, and the second is that they dont have time to play with others which is ...
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Line 7, column 641, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lso necessary for them to grow healthy. The third reason is that too much anticipat...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... them grow healthy. In conclusion, I dont think it is a good suggestion to detect...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'child'?
Suggestion: child
...on to detect and train a young talented children for they may lose their talent through ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67961165049 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57070365788 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471844660194 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2585353456 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.782608696 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13043478261 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294218689194 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913344431408 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522030902184 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181826625017 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363595797688 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...d not provide enough resource to train. Whats more, talent for science and art may be...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A chine' or simply 'Chines'?
Suggestion: A chine; Chines
...he talent eliminates as kid growing up. A Chines ancient story shows a kid who is talent...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e. The reason is that firstly he or she have no time to learn new things because the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 556, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g talented, and the second is that they dont have time to play with others which is ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 641, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lso necessary for them to grow healthy. The third reason is that too much anticipat...
^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... them grow healthy. In conclusion, I dont think it is a good suggestion to detect...
^^^^
Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'child'?
Suggestion: child
...on to detect and train a young talented children for they may lose their talent through ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67961165049 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57070365788 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471844660194 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2585353456 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.782608696 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13043478261 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294218689194 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913344431408 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522030902184 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181826625017 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363595797688 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.