Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
It is the responsibility of humans to maintain the ecological balance of our planet by virtue of their being the most intelligent creatures on earth. Moreover, Man has the necessary power to save endangered species to ensure that the ecological balance of the Earth is not disturbed. However, there is no apparent reason for society to save endangered species at costs of money and jobs that are very high. Therefore, it is essential that society makes all possible efforts to save endangered species, but if the costs involved are sky high, then the society can choose not to save the species and save the human costs instead.
We no longer see Dinosaurs on the planet whereas they freely roamed on Earth eons ago. Has their non-existence made any difference to life on Earth? It can be accepted that their disappearance would have made some difference to the food chain as they were one of the most prominent predators. However, in today's context their absence has no effect on the food chain existing on the planet. Similarly, it is highly probable that the extinction of a particular species of animals may be of no consequence in the future. Therefore, it would not be justified to spend an enormous amount of money in trying to save the species. On the other hand, if the species can be saved without much investment, then society should do its bit to preserve the environment and the animals that live therein.
The same line of reasoning may not hold true for certain types of plants and animals. This is because apart from providing nutrition, certain species of plants and animals have been known to have therapeutic advantages including herbal remedies. For instance, cod-liver oil is well known for its content of Omega 3 fatty acids that help you fight against heart disease, cancer, depression, arthritis, Alzheimer's disease, ulcers, diabetes and a host of other diseases. Plants containing Aloe Vera have now been found to have extremely useful healing properties and all the species containing Aloe Vera are now in high demand. Therefore, society may have to make an attempt to save any of these species if they are endangered, but technology has now developed so much that one can look for other alternatives if the cost of saving these species goes beyond what society can easily afford.
There are certain natural events that are beyond the control of society. Recurring floods, storms, forest fires, climatic changes etc. may be playing havoc with the existence of certain types of rare species. There is little that society can do to contain such events in such a way that the species are preserved. There will be the requirement of pulling in maximum resources for making efforts to save every endangered species. Society will need to go to extreme extents in case of attempting to save endangered species that exist at high altitudes or at ocean floors. Therefore, in a majority of cases, society should avoid making an attempt to save endangered species that would require colossal efforts.
The fact remains that in the face of catastrophic chain effects as a result of the extinction of a particular plant or animal, it might become necessary for society to save the species. Other than this reason, there is no evident reason for which society should invest huge amounts of money and other human costs to save each and every species of plants and animals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2464 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.1776 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08 0.0880659088768 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0288 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0576 0.0406280797675 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60249744343 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0368 0.030933414821 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0912 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304 0.0249443105267 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112 0.0148568991511 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3398.0 2732.02544248 124% => OK
No of words: 573.0 452.878318584 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93019197208 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357766143106 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284467713787 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162303664921 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113438045375 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60249744343 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 219.290929204 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469458987784 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.4551389147 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.92 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9891596322 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.92 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.92 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.64 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 51.3667713787 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.6875 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.519813125473 0.391690518653 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129195318895 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0825578031753 0.077325440228 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520043182546 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137449408455 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199991605757 0.161403998019 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976276784796 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.403935713147 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0881531383469 0.0692045440612 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.373887137593 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559951818093 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.