Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Over the past decades, there have been increasing debate regarding the protection of endangered species. Human beings during the past decades have done the several effect on wildlife and their habitat which lead abundant species become endangered. The given statement " society should make effort to save endangered species only of the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities" is not agreed me fully. The society should give valuable contributions to protect these species even they are not responsible because of the following reasons.
Firstly, this species are the part of ecosystems which is part of the environment. lacking one in the ecosystem might result the negative consequences in the ecosystem. Society's people should take this in mind while preserving this animals and plants because this plants and animal have their important existence like man in the environment. For instance, polar bear which is found in cold reason, do the global warming which is not society's negative effect but other society, have great effect and they are declining due to this factors. Reduction of polar bear due to the ice melting and lack of food that they eat. Hence, the working of the society is not only responsible for the reduction of species but by the overall global effects. So, we should take important consideration regarding the declination of this species.
Secondly, animal and plant in this categories have several unique feature and this feature might attract the tourists so that by making the conservation area we should gain the revenue in the society. For example, one horned Rhino is endangered species, with the effort by the government and society in Nepal attract the million of tourist to visit Nepal for this scenarios. By preserving this give the revenue to the government as well as incline people to do work for saving this species.
In conclusion, society should devoted themselves to conserve the environment that is the habitat of animals because of their importance in environment as well as they generated the revenue to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24117647059 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73111477043 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7309037256 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239197189209 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867308999198 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854255276803 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141673196798 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975085947603 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.