Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Each and every living being present on the planet is of significant importance. Be it human or any other species, being alive is all what we could hope for. In my opinion, efforts should be made in order to protect all species which are in danger, irrespective of its cause.
In the early ages, there were a lot of different species as compared to the current scenario, and this abundance was taken for granted and hunting was considered to be a courageous sport and was very common back then. The implications of it can been seen as many of the species or various breeds of these speices have become extinct. Thankfully, this sport is now not in practice, but still there are several cases reported wherein, animals are harmed and killed by humans. One example of indirectly harming the species is our uncontrolled use of plastics which have been then thrown into the water bodies and many of the marine fishes have consumed it and some of them have died due to chocking. Another reason of their decline is the changes in the climate. The polluted air and water is majorly detrimental to land animals.
We humans are triggered about this issue only when we see statistics and numbers about the decline of various species. I feel that it is important to protect each and every species as they help to maintain an ecological balance. The ecosystem will be hampered rigorously if the species start to extinct. Proper investigation should be done and the cause for this decline should be found out. Accordingly several efforts should be taken and campagins should be promoted. For example, there is a rising risk of the extinction of tigers and hence several countries have taken significant efforts in the form of forest department officials constructing water ponds in forests. Also the animals which are at the risk of extinction have been tagged and monitored by means of GPS technology in order to keep a count and also for their safety reasons.
In conclusion, I feel that each and every species have the right to live and we as humans should take each and every possible effort in order to protect these species irrespective of their cause of depletion. Just like us these species are also living creatures and should be treated with love and affection rather than harming them or killing them. They help to make this world a better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...ommon back then. The implications of it can been seen as many of the species or various ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...e for this decline should be found out. Accordingly several efforts should be taken and cam...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ls constructing water ponds in forests. Also the animals which are at the risk of ex...
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Line 13, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this world a better place to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78780487805 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53153343075 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.641972442 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.315789474 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172678062743 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550732921323 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365817608306 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112217030016 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270182556887 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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