Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
As the education system is developing,students are motivated to pursue their passion rather than following other people. Students are taught in schools and from their parents to follow their dream and this is the right thing to do rather than doing jobs in which that student has no interest. If something is done with enthusiasm then the there are more chances to be successful and people can do something with enthusiasm only if they have passion in doing that.
When sachin tendulkar was in 10th grade he failed in exams. If at that time his parents would have thought that he cannot do the worthy job because he is not good in studies then he would have not been in the position he is today. His parents supported his dreams of becoming a cricketer and now he is one of the most famous batsman in the world. He is called the god of cricket world.
Similar is the case of lata mangeshkar,one of the most famous singers worldwide.with her euphony voice she won the heart of many people around the globe. If she had been forced to do what other people are doing then we would not have songs like vande matram.she pursued her dream and now she is the queen of singing world.Her age in 105 and still one of the greatest singers born.
The King of bollywood shahrukh khan is the actor who is liked by most of us not only in india but worldwide. He is called the king of romance and is one of the most rich and fine actors around the world. If he would have thought to become a doctor or an engineer he may not have been this successful he is today and we would have missed his impeccable acting in movies like my name is khan,kal ho na ho etc.
If the above famous personalities would have thought that the would go with the flow and become what everyone is blindly following they may not have been that successful they are now and would not stand out of million of faces in the world. so people should follow their passion rather then blindly following others. People can be most successful if they have a passion about their vocation because they will like doing that with utter enthusiasm and will give their 100 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , students
As the education system is developing,students are motivated to pursue their passion r...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... if they have passion in doing that. When sachin tendulkar was in 10th grade he f...
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Message: Did you mean 'had thought'?
Suggestion: had thought
...d in exams. If at that time his parents would have thought that he cannot do the worthy job becaus...
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... Similar is the case of lata mangeshkar,one of the most famous singers worldwide.wi...
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Suggestion: Her
...d now she is the queen of singing world.Her age in 105 and still one of the greates...
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Message: Did you mean 'had thought'?
Suggestion: had thought
...and fine actors around the world. If he would have thought to become a doctor or an engineer he ma...
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Suggestion: , kal
...le acting in movies like my name is khan,kal ho na ho etc. If the above famous pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'had thought'?
Suggestion: had thought
...c. If the above famous personalities would have thought that the would go with the flow and bec...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...d out of million of faces in the world. so people should follow their passion rath...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ople should follow their passion rather then blindly following others. People can be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210653753027 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.200968523002 0.157235817809 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0556900726392 0.0880659088768 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0653753026634 0.0497285424764 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0847457627119 0.0444667217837 191% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133171912833 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0653753026634 0.0406280797675 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37915729897 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.030933414821 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0823244552058 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0387409200969 0.0249443105267 155% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121065375303 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2130.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 391.0 452.878318584 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44757033248 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27621483376 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171355498721 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0946291560102 0.200843997647 47% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0690537084399 0.132149295362 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37915729897 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457800511509 0.48968727796 93% => OK
Word variations: 48.5195954833 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0666666667 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8117250699 59.4972553346 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.674092028746 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.2022165388 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.16551724138 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248656576286 0.391690518653 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189661535895 0.123202303941 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861228042706 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620660201928 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1360852619 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118741191954 0.161403998019 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470214077949 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305040772282 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0624670198547 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167766106277 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261297905055 0.0653680567796 40% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.