Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Promotion of socio-economic growth and being a part of their development is a choice taken by individuals and corporations. Though highly encouraged that they consider it as their responsibility to contribute a little proportion of their profits, those who do not do so, can not be deemed completely wrong.
Corporations here refers to large organizations whose main aim is to run a successful business and make money, until and unless the corporation is a full-time NGO targeting only at a specific community and environmental needs.
The appropriate and adequate utilization of the profits earned is solely in the hands of these corporations and their governing philosophy.
Many of them have special dedicated departments called CSR i.e. "Corporate Social Responsibility" where they target specific segments and areas of the environment or society to which they wish to contribute and help them improve. Child education, rural development, green plantation drives can be a few of them. Then, there are cases of some philanthropists, the most notable being Mr. Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft, who donated his majority of wealth earned to the charity. Thus, the path that a corporation takes to service and promote the well-being of society and environment is totally dependent on the decisions and the governing philosophy of them.
There are yet many of them, which do not wish to contribute to the social growth and are governed by the mere principle of making business and earning more and more profits. Since, the very fact that how are the profits earned being utilized is at the sole discretion of the corporation itself, therefore they not supporting or being a part of the socio-economic development can not be termed as irresponsible or not fulfilling their responsibility. Though, it is highly suggested and encouraged that they should be a part of such noble causes.
Thus, to conclude we can restate the well-known fact that nobody is right or wrong, everyone is right in their own way. Therefore, though highly encouraged by the corporations to promote the well-being of the society and respecting and highlighting those already doing so, commenting on those which mainly earns profits so as to seek prosperity only for themselves by believing that that is their main responsibility will not be entirely correct.
- Some people say that technology has made life simpler, while others say it has made it more complex. 16
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 62
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 321, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ing on those which mainly earns profits so as to seek prosperity only for themselves by ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211302211302 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.17199017199 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859950859951 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0737100737101 0.0497285424764 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0565110565111 0.0444667217837 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105651105651 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0638820638821 0.0406280797675 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16598139954 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.029484029484 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933660933661 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014742014742 0.0249443105267 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019656019656 0.0148568991511 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2336.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 452.878318584 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22933333333 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365333333333 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277333333333 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176 0.132149295362 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16598139954 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514666666667 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 55.7965194351 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7857142857 23.380412469 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3973054331 59.4972553346 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.857142857 141.124799967 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 23.380412469 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 54.519047619 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.26016260163 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516116085155 0.391690518653 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0992121563389 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684739405304 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642931048987 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209519999621 0.149214159877 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218809421414 0.161403998019 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104515906722 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335655112863 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.149291071491 0.0692045440612 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318410158455 0.275328986314 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876834714162 0.0653680567796 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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