Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The first claim of the prompt mentions the responsibility of a corporation towards the society and environment ensuring their well being. The second claim brings out the deeper interest of any corporation mentioning their restricted path while operating under provided law making money as their only concern. The second claim is more aligned to what a corporation would primarily consider but the term “only” is somewhat weakens the claim as not being concerned about the society or environment is not how it works in reality.
Firstly, if any industrial corporation is considered, definitely its prime concern would be making profit as much as possible and establishing rules so that it brings more product within limited investment and ensuring larger profit. For instance, if the amonia production is considered which has ubiquitous use around the world especially as fertilizer, it would be seen that a myriad of chemicals are used to make the process faster whereas too much chemical is equally bad for the environment and the society. Still they do not ban the idea of using excessive chemical as they prefer having more product than anything else.
Another factor to be considered is that despite making profit as the major consideration of any corporation, there must be laws that consider environment friendliness that the industry must follow otherwise it would be blacklisted by the government following a banning if not followed strictly. The amonia industry must have chimneys to suck the wasted chemical out and must have treatment plant within the industry to make sure it does not affect the environment crossing the limited boundry. The industry must pay a good amount to establish and maintain the treatment plant which does not bring money but keeps the industry going.
If the corporation has a conflict between profit making and safety issues, it would keep the former one as primary and the later one as secondary. The amonia industry will not pay a bigger amount to maintain the treatment plant rather they would curb the budget from this part and would include to the part where they can buy more chemicals for ensuring more profit.
In conclusion, money is what keeps a corporation running. At the same time it is established to make some benefit towards the society. so it could be said that the two claims are interrelated definitely but the second claim is to some extent the priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Still,
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...oney but keeps the industry going. If the corporation has a conflict betwee...
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Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18546365915 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78840499517 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4534420475 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.785714286 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147117275365 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555235661033 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376767898848 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786959339473 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325216280754 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.