Arts, from music to paintings, are essential for people. We can get cultivated through different kinds of
arts. The government, on the other hand, settle lots of business everyday.I doubt whether the government should support arts. If really do, in what way of funding the government could make? While others think the funding may threaten the integrity of the arts, I agree with the this view in part while it may do harm to the arts if the government influence more.
To begin with, some arts can make money, while some of them need to be saved. Paintings of famous paint like Van Gogh,his masterpiece could sell millions of dollars, but as a students in art school, they may have a difficult start of the art path.In this situation, they could be helped by others, not only the government ,the whole society could help in different ways like donation or free exhibition held by enterprise.So this is not the responsibility of government in total, who will take care of lots of other business. Some arts, on the other hand, are on the edge of extinction,like folk lore of some ethnic nation, which need to be protected.At this point, it is a good time for the government to show muscles and fund to save these kind of immetarial heritages.
On the other hand, if the government take wrong measure in funding to help arts,it may be harmful to the intergrity of arts.Having been visit to tokyo and kyoto, I found the government make good plans in protecting ancient buidings,which recover it what it look like,with no more decoration.While in China, I found a lot of places of interest, where the old temples or buildings were furnished inside out, looks like completed yesterday.With this kind of new look, we can olny find the fakeness of this kind of recovery.
What's more, it is a good measure to make specific plans of government fundings so people could use the mony of taxpayers more efficiently.
In conclusion,I partly agree with the government's funding may do harm to the integrity of arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, really, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8242074928 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8254599352 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544668587896 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.626357931 60.3974514979 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.181818182 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320947944756 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133089529238 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478503612759 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164354431407 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074895736874 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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