There is a saying "attitude is half the battle" referring to your mental states when you take on a challange. Viewing a challenge as an oppurtunity to test youself and see what you are truly capable of. The results will often surprise you, yourself, the most more than anyone else.
You will seldom see athilets or politicains say they can't beat their opponent, for if they did they would more than likely lose the game or election they are in. If you go into a challenge with a self defeated attitude you've already failed at whatever it is you've set out to do. You should view any challenge laid before you as a change to prove yourself not only to the world, but to yourself. There are plethera of stories of people going far above and beyond what they thought they would be able to, runners who have shattered record times, soliders who pushed futher then they ever thought possible, students who scored higher than their wildest dreams. Do to them viewing what lay ahead of them as a chance to prove their worth and grow as a person.This mindset will make one try and see how far they can push themselves. Pushing themselves further and further then one who simply wishes to do their duty. With this mentality you will reach your natural peak as it were, seeing as there may be some task or challenge you simply can't beat and may never be able to. When you hit that you'll realize how far you've come.
There is a sort of rugid stoic beauty in viewing a challenge simply as a task at hand rather then a challenge, which in a cold logical sense it is. It conjures up a solider surverying a battlefield before entering the frey or a surgeon walking into the OR. However, humans are seldom cold logical beings, we as emotional creatures do need certain aspect hype if it were. An excellent demonstration of this would be the two great Roman generals Julius Caesar and Pompey the Great. Caesar's men were fanatically loyal and believed they could follow him to the ends of the world, whereas Pompey's men were simply doing their duty to their general and to the Republic. It should come as no surprise that Caesar won and ultimately overthrew the Republic on the back of his fanatical men and their self belief. This is a common trait among many of the giants of history, a fanatical drive where they want to see how far they can push themselves. This is how Everest was summited, this is how we landed on the Moon, this is how will launch ourselves into the stars.
One should always see any difficulty in their life as an opportunity for self growth and learning. If we never pushed ourselves we would never reach our full potential. If you view every challenge before you as not an obsticale before you, but a learning experience you'll go farther than you ever imagined you would.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, whereas, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55357142857 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39607548318 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1138881076 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.318181818 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126619862528 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039666360974 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400062007904 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837999218246 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112587538881 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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