Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Going from simply wanting to cook our food and have fresh berries to harvest at winter's end, to traveling to the moon and trying to cure every aliment known to man, humans have always strived to better society. History has shown that time and again people, given a problem, will come together and try to solve it.
Since the beginning of written history man has always sought to improve his lot in life. Through this sometime selfish, sometime selfless desire to make problems easier or evaporate entirely, we have marched mankind to places our ancient primate couldn't even begin to comprehend. One could say if we compare ourselves to our ancient ancestors that we have solves all of society's problems in the way they would see of it; the majority of humanity eats well, has access to water, shelter, medicine, and no real predators any more. A cave man in 10,000BCE would probably imagine 2019 as utopia beyond his wildest imagination.
People by and large don't wish to willingly cause harm to others. They will often go out of their way to aid them if they can. History is full of brave men and women of science who gave their lives to help further our understanding and try to help society as best they could. Names like; Marie Curie, John Snow, and Alexander Fleming all dedicated their lives to try and improve people's lives with their discoveries. Today in some lab or lecture hall there is the Curie or Fleming briming with ideas on how to improve society with science.
That is not to say all progress is without its issues. Some inventions or discoveries have unforseen consequences, such as Alfred Nobel's invention of dynomite, he thought it would help mining and construction, he would famously find out in a premature obituary that the world saw him as merchant of death for dynomite had become widely used as an explosive for wars. Horrified by this Nobel went and founded the Nobel Prize, whose goal is rewarding those who further science and world peace. Science can also be deliberately misused such as in the case of Nobe Prize winner Fritz Haber, who discovered a way to manufactor vast quantities of fertilizer save millions if not billions from starvation, went and used this same process to help the German Empire construct bombs and explosives for the first World War.
There is a quote from the brilliant tv comedy Futurama: "Science isn't good or evil it is how you use it that is" No man is inhariently evil, infact most people given the opportunity would help others. We have come a long way since discovering fire, and may have a long way to go, but one day we will solve all problems before us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 11.1786427146 197% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 461.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72885032538 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46726346606 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 204.123752495 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594360086768 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.130732282 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.235294118 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 5.70786347227 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161145733903 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465016003779 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420652130493 0.0701772020484 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081825810064 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404310567536 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.