Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change
In the above issue the writer says that it is very difficult to decrease the energy consumption in the developed nation. I am in total agreement with that of the author. There seems no loop for disagreement with author's view. There are multiple reason for my approval with the author view. I will try to elaborate in above paragraph.
First of all, the writer says that in the developed nation it is very difficult to reduce energy consumption as many day to day needs has become dependent on the energy. Thus it seems very difficult to reduce the energy consumption. Moreover, there many other reason which will prompt my approval.
Secondly, the writer say that such drastic change are unwarranted. Thus , I am completely in acceptances with it. As the change in the atmosphere may bring many environment changes also and it may turn to difficulty. For example, today’s generation is directly or indirectly dependent upon the energy for the welfare of it. From small pin to that of the ginatic, everything is dependent on the energy. However, reducement of the energy may reduce the invention of the new machine. The reduction in the energy may thus reduce the progress of the nation. Thus many new problems maybe faced due to this. Thus energy consumption is one of the basic necessities for carrying out daily needs and to stop it is unjustified.
Thirdly, the writer further says that such changes can unwarranted as it may affect the global climate. Thus the change may be harmful. In the developed nation, it very difficult to reduce the energy consumption. Similarly, many household activities are dependent on the energy and to reduce them will may result into many problems. As in the developed nation, invention and research are very important. Thus with invention and research, the energy consumption plays a major role.
On conclusion, I would like to say that there seems no disagreement for the acceptance with the author. To bulk evidence as whole, I would like to say that the reduction in the energy consumption may reduce the progress of the nation. After all life has many option, we take some and abandon some. Thus to take risk is just imperative
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun day seems to be countable; consider using: 'many days'.
Suggestion: many days
...fficult to reduce energy consumption as many day to day needs has become dependent on th...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...eds has become dependent on the energy. Thus it seems very difficult to reduce the e...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uch drastic change are unwarranted. Thus , I am completely in acceptances with it....
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...thus reduce the progress of the nation. Thus many new problems maybe faced due to th...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...y new problems maybe faced due to this. Thus energy consumption is one of the basic ...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
.... Thus energy consumption is one of the basic necessities for carrying out daily needs and to sto...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ed as it may affect the global climate. Thus the change may be harmful. In the devel...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ention and research are very important. Thus with invention and research, the energy...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
...gress of the nation. After all life has many option, we take some and abandon some. Thus to...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... option, we take some and abandon some. Thus to take risk is just imperative
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'after all', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21686746988 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.13734939759 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103614457831 0.0880659088768 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055421686747 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0433734939759 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122891566265 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.00481927710843 0.0406280797675 12% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.74011193124 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361445783133 0.030933414821 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00240963855422 0.0016655270985 145% => OK
Determiners: 0.115662650602 0.0997080785238 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.033734939759 0.0249443105267 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00240963855422 0.0148568991511 16% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2179.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 371.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87331536388 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33423180593 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239892183288 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194070080863 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148247978437 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74011193124 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423180592992 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5926384957 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7407407407 23.380412469 59% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3777854038 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7037037037 141.124799967 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7407407407 23.380412469 59% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.592592592593 0.674092028746 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.7299590696 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.45918367347 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325234880426 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137097591148 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131896260516 0.077325440228 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497606742566 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171218005757 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127514633372 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621504319211 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.505088306724 0.385218514788 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0706642646109 0.0692045440612 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238295516034 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257022583442 0.0653680567796 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.