Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
Whether or not, the humans should save the endangered species despite the price to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. This topic gives rise to many more controversial topics such as consumerism, humanity, environmental issues, and eco-system. Yes! It is important and duty of every person to protect the environment around us.
Think of a world without plants, trees, animals and drinking water? Can we imagine a world where only humans can survive? Can we survive without them? The answer for me to all these questions is a big No. Earth is so diversified with wonderful creatures in which each and every one of us play a vital role. Every creature is helping to maintain the balance in the eco-system. When a question comes to efforts, time, and finances, still the answer wouldn’t change. It remains YES. If every one of us cuts the tree around our house to make space for our living, then what would remain in the end? Someone should something to stop all this right? Why can’t you be that someone? What use of time when we make this Earth unfit for living? It takes very little from us to make difference.
Humans are greedy creatures, we consume more than we need to survive. It all comes to choices between necessary and “nice to have”. Killing animals for leather products is an example of nice to have category and cutting trees for more space is also not necessity. Now we have reached to a point where we take our children to zoo to show them the birds and animals which was once found everywhere around us. For instance, Sparrow, few decades back it was found everywhere. I grew up watching the sparrows around me all the time but as I grew up I don’t see them anywhere now. Researchers found that use of mobile phone is the reason for sparrows’ disappearance. Back then every house had one phone but now even the 5-year-old has a phone.
Irony is that we spend more money on a dog we have at home but instead we can also think that spending some amount on saving some species would help them survive this world. We should all stop spending on leather products and donate the same amount to some organization which utilizes that amount to protect endanger species. Government should make strict rules and regulations in protecting environment. That is the least we could do to keep this earth beautiful. Live and let Live.
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- Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. 50
- Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in mon 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not, the humans should save the endangered ...
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Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...ant and duty of every person to protect the environment around us. Think of a world without plants, tr...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...ified with wonderful creatures in which each and every one of us play a vital role. Every creature...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding sparrows'?
Suggestion: the surrounding sparrows
...as found everywhere. I grew up watching the sparrows around me all the time but as I grew up I don&apo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76144578313 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62528544647 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549397590361 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0053902032 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5714285714 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.8214285714 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10714285714 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129317186401 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339940359126 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511697112532 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092105930013 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469452536745 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.