"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists,
but the general welfare of all its people."
Through the course of human history we have seen the rise and fall of many civiizations and nations. From the great advancements of the telephone, the internet, the computer to the downs of economic recession in 1980s and 1990s, we have seen both. The indicators of what makes up a great nation is a conglomeration of many ideas. The topic statement above proposes that general welfare of people is what determines a nations greatness rather than the achievements of its rulers, artists or scientists. I am in concordance with the author's statement, but I also believe that these achievements of people also play a concise role in achieving greatness.
When one thinks of general welfare of the people, the buzzwords that come to mind are political freedom, personal safety, good healthcare facilities, basic education, high standards of living and so on. A nation which focuses in its policies on women and child safety paves way for its citizens to live a calm and unfearful life. A nation's heathcare facilities are always looked upon when determining how developed and successful the country is. An overall compendatory healthcare system in place assures the citizens and gives them the confidence to fight life-threathining diseases. Basic education must always be one of the top priorities for a nation. The literacy rate of a nation always leads to greater upbringing of scientists, engineers, doctors from a nation.
Taking an example of two countries Switzerland and Myanmar.Switzerland has been ranked among one of the countries that provide the highest standards of living in the world, which is inclusive of an efficient health care system and free education for all their citizens.Their success is reflected in their social, political and economic stability. On the other hand, Myanmar is a complete opposite representation of Switzerland. A country that has been backed by a harsh autocratic military regime for years, the citizens of Myanmar have long been oppressed and denied of many basic human rights.By using the illustration of these two countries, it is fair to say that the general welfare of a nation's people is the surest indicator of a great/successful nation.
In conclusion, a nation providing well for its people is bound to achieve greatness in the world. Importance given on the above mentioned fields always lead to an overall development of a country and makes a country self-independent. The achievements of a nation's rulers, artists and scientists are important indicators of a great nation as well but their achievements are tied to the general welfare of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the 1980s
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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...cientists. I am in concordance with the authors statement, but I also believe that thes...
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...zens to live a calm and unfearful life. A nations heathcare facilities are always looked ...
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...iteracy rate of a nation always leads to greater upbringing of scientists, engine...
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...indicator of a great/successful nation. In conclusion, a nation providing well f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19668246445 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15992306339 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511848341232 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9946746911 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368809735241 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11382229639 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128277611158 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230405713276 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104447429447 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.